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http://illestlyrics.com/board/pretendin ... t3720.html <-LiNk

heres a piece im workin on it all goes 2 a beat i juz want yall opinion if u like it or whatnot...plz..

verse 1

i hit the mall n break,-n-start ballin 4 cake
and now u callin it fake,cuz u fallin 4 fate
now u stallin wit hate,cuz im'a rapper and
my stats are gettin tall-n-great
comin from Syracuse,go ahead stare its cute
cuz i dont care if u,aint really down wit me
i wont share the loot (what i have so far 4 the 1st verse)

here the chorus

just sing it,sing it now
im'a bring the house down
just sing it,sing it now
now im on the prowl
just sing it ,sing it now
im'a bring the house down
(say twice)

feed?

nice, the flow was dope as fuck, im sure it would sound dope on audio if u get the right beat and such

ye man i'ma use 'air force ones' by nelly i no its nelly but it sounds hot as hell i been practicin..lol but thanks uppin 4more feed

rawk on vince!! =)

lol thanks sammy! uppin PPlz