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Posted: **Wed Feb 07, 2007 9:30 pm**

She bleeds, she vomits, her tears are no more.
She laughs, she plays, problems left behind the door.

Her heart, it breaks, his love for her inexistent.
The other man, loves her face, but she is resistant.

Her weight, she hates, she sits by the kitchen.
The knife, is in her face, will she make her decision?

Her life, is at stake, what will she do?
Make a mistake? Or face what she was brought into.

Running away, is her only break out
But will her running, ever see time out?

please and thanks??

Posted: **Wed Feb 07, 2007 9:38 pm**

The other man, loves her face, but she is resistant.

feelin that line^^ if ur referin 2 the whole 'girls r only pretty on the outside thing..' lol aint tru tho..neways nice lil poem tho sam,short,sweet got 2 the point good job

Posted: **Wed Feb 07, 2007 9:41 pm**

ty vince apreciate ur feedback!

Posted: **Wed Feb 07, 2007 9:42 pm**

u welcome

Posted: **Wed Feb 07, 2007 11:20 pm**

Yea Dis Wus Aiight ... Keep Droppin

Posted: **Sat Feb 10, 2007 4:46 am**

WELL Miss thang, I really liked your poem - we seem to have YET another thing in common! lol I write like this through my poetry as well....I wanna see more of your work woman. Show us what else is in that pretty lil head of yours ;p

The poem was short but it defo got the point across and made a statment Good job mama

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