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Gettin a Jist of Spittin Writtens thru Lingustics Twisted To Inflict Whits,
Ina Split Instant Misfits Shiftin the Missions of Postions is the Difference,
Please Believe Me I Freely Leave Thee competion Beneathe Me so Easy,
If Need Be Ill Release G's till you Meet Thee G.O.D. to Feel the Reel Peace,
I'll give Chaney & Bush some Rage ina Look jus Mainly to Push,
One more Page in my Books, Im On another level like T.H.C in the Kush,
But Ive Cleaned out my System like a Fein turnin Christian,
Vowed to never Believe in the System, as it Seems to be Distant,
It really isnt, its Closer than Death, Im Blessed to be Sober, Im Over the Sess,
Ima Soldier, a Vet, but theres More to be Said, Im like a Bolder when Wet,
Im Hard as can be yet you cant Stand on Me, if you Challenge Me!,
I Kill you Randomly like the Government would for Treason & Blasphomy,
My Multies are Vicious so ReSolve ur Suspitions that Im False when Im Rippin,
Open my Vault and Im Gifted to leave you Assaulted and Lifted,
Ill leave you Twisted and Open, Im invadin to conquer like Hitler did Polland,
In the end Ima takw away your voice like when sick kids Limphnods are Swollen....

this is a really nice drop G... i liked this line alot

But Ive Cleaned out my System like a Fein turnin Christian,
Vowed to never Believe in the System, as it Seems to be Distant,
It really isnt, its Closer than Death, Im Blessed to be Sober, Im Over the Sess,
Ima Soldier, a Vet, but theres More to be Said, Im like a Bolder when Wet,
Im Hard as can be yet you cant Stand on Me, if you Challenge Me!,
I Kill you Randomly like the Government would for Treason & Blasphomy,
My Multies are Vicious so ReSolve ur Suspitions that Im False when Im Rippin,
Open my Vault and Im Gifted to leave you Assaulted and Lifted,
Ill leave you Twisted and Open, Im invadin to conquer like Hitler did Polland,
In the end Ima takw away your voice like when sick kids Limphnods are Swollen....

good job homie

thanx man, i wrote this to Point of No Return Instrumental by Immortal Technique.

UppiN

Nice Mayne....Real Nice...

Liked thiz Line Alot

I'll give Chaney & Bush some Rage ina Look jus Mainly to Push,
One more Page in my Books, Im On another level like T.H.C in the Kush

thanx man, feedbacks appreciated!!!

holy fuck that was mad good! I loved these ones:

Gettin a Jist of Spittin Writtens thru Lingustics Twisted To Inflict Whits,
Ina Split Instant Misfits Shiftin the Missions of Postions is the Difference,
Please Believe Me I Freely Leave Thee competion Beneathe Me so Easy,
If Need Be Ill Release G's till you Meet Thee G.O.D. to Feel the Reel Peace,

^^^^^your vocab is shining


Im Hard as can be yet you cant Stand on Me, if you Challenge Me!,
I Kill you Randomly like the Government would for Treason & Blasphomy,
My Multies are Vicious so ReSolve ur Suspitions that Im False when Im Rippin,
Open my Vault and Im Gifted to leave you Assaulted and Lifted,
Ill leave you Twisted and Open, Im invadin to conquer like Hitler did Polland,
In the end Ima takw away your voice like when sick kids Limphnods are Swollen....

nice nice nice nice

lol @ lawgix basically quotin the whole piece

yea i was feelin this, nice rhymes, some nice content in there for sure

Vowed to never Believe in the System, as it Seems to be Distant, It really isnt,

my fav line ^^^

Mad Props to Yall for the FeedBack, thanx to all that left feed.

UppiN

Yah. Nice man. Honestly though this lyrical stuff is awesome. But eventually you need to work on rapping on topics. At some point its the rhymes guiding your flow & not your mind. Which is a problem. So I would like to see that.

The first 3-4 bars were my favorite. A good read.

thanx plex ill keep that in mind

UppiN!!!!!

yup i enjoyed reading this, was alot of parts i liked so i wont go into the trouble of pointing them all out lol, but i like your views and your shit is hot

thanx first lady....

mos def appreciate your feedback

UppiN

dat shit was da hottest ive heard from you keep it up my nigga!