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6-8 barz due tommorow

relax man, check

lol, arighty heres my verse, yea i was sayin to viral normaly you gotta check in before a deadline is posted, but it aint a big deal. anyways yea here ya go.

hey-plex we already battled so you know you aint-best/ and to tell you the truth i aint feelin youre rhymes like safe-sex wit extra latex/

read along as i spit wit shakespearic strategy/
cause every emcee to battle-me is left as a "tragedy"/ a clash-with-me is a catastrophy/

you gotta watch youre bones when i spit straight-faced/ cause after a battle takes-place im like an angry waiter- i break-"plates"/

i spit like a scythe- yea my "cut's" "against the grain"/ yours is basic so i must "reject ya name"/

*rhyme-defecit-disorder* is the only way you "complex"/ youre useless in text- its like Im battlin blind kids without brail on the net/

and to finish this-off ill remind you that you spit-soft/ if boards were streets id be rippin a fuckin clip-off into youre bitch-talk with these raps i so easily deafeat kids-thoughts/

to clear things up a "complex" is a psychological disorder, if you dont believe me look it up if you want. and if someone doesnt get the other metaphores, i donno what to say cause they are fairly simple. peace, and good luck

its hell-ya-facin, i'll cut at ya brain for cell-a-brasion....precise? YAh! like delegation!!//
i'm taking names and making the-statement//in Evil call me Keanu Reeves I'll be your replacement//

fuck this imposter, i'm as precise as possible, you on E.V.I.L's Roster which means you're not an obstacle//
lost-ya-bones, when i crossed-ya-dome, your raps not a-parent like a foster-home//

a true-emcee, i spit fluently,i'm getting rid of "pre" and he still aint hit puberty//
with his first-free, he didn't hurt-me, now i'm burning P like genital herpees//

when it comes to shit, in-rap-your-it...makes me sick, his style is like the news its inaccurate//
put together-the-factors, i'm putting you underground further then levers-in-tractors//

I'm dropping a PR, but he aint causing no trouble//its funny his "rap career" is taking off like last years shuttle//
make this kid pissed n watch his blood-bubble//i'm suttle, "ur flow shallow" like a mud-puddle//

no rebuttle! its quieter than recitals, "i'm giving away medals" but not free-titles//
fuck teen-idols, i'm through-idle, cuz Im dropping P (pee) like kids that are suicidal//

Pr: problem report, common

any others, just ask, good luck
medals: is the system on here, and medal as in car,
title owning a car

apparent (meant precise)

lol havent been much battles on here in awhile this is a sad comeback tho

awww, 16 mics is that because all the mettaphores were over youre head? were sorry we didnt dim it down for you

actually they didnt it was just pretty boring but try again better luck next time..

ey, ladies this isn't a lounge, lets get some votes

by the way, i'm sure you will have no objection seeing that i'm not in a crew, but they can vote, for lack of people

entertainement:complexity
multis:precise
metaphors:complexity
similies:precise
creativity:complexity
vocab:complexity
wordplay:complexity
punchlines:complexity

i thought this was a pretty good battle .. thought precise would've won.. but i liked toms alot better

overall vote:complexity

multis - complexity, precise just had lil 2 syllable pieces for the most part
metaphors - precise
similies - complexity, precises didn't hit hard at all
rhyme scheme - tie, neither used any besides basic
structure - complexity, precises was all over the place
lines - complexity

overall - complexity, this battle wasn't that great

if i may interject, the second bar was all 3 syllable multie, the fourth bar was 6 syllable multies. not swaying just pointing out to all-killah

thats why i said for the most part...

lets get some more votes on this battle

Multis:Precise
Metas:Plex
Similies:Precise
Enjoyment:Plex
Vocab:Plex
Wordplay:Plex
Rhyme Scheme:hhmmm Plex
Personals:Plex

Overall:Plex

keep it up both of you i mean u did good too precise but toms stood out more it had better vocab,wordplay,etc... and didnt get kinda boring but keep it up your good..but tom got this one..elevate...