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About To Rip Your Name And Tear Ya Sound Cause Nobodys Buying-Your -Rell...//
Doesnt Matter If You Lack Today Cause The Next Ill Be The One Who Is Signing-The-Deal..//
Trying To Let Go Of This World Put My Worry To Shreds And Rest-My-Tears...//
Even Though Things Seem Bad Im Heading Up And Spitting Past-My-Years...//
When I Battle My Best It Still Seems It Wasnt Good Enough Like Im Beggeing-To-Fade..//
Through The Dark And Rough Times Ill Always Strive Cause Raps The-Decsion-I-Made..//
Get A Sensastion When I Hold The Pen And The Pad Hearts Pumping Getting a Reckioned-Chest
Nowing Some Were A Persons Better Then Me Doesnt Hurt Ill Excel Till Im Not Second-Best...//
The World Around Us Lurks In Opputuinty And Dreams But Never Be Truley Breath-Taken...//
Cause As Much As You Deserve These Things You Can Always Feel Left-Mistaken...//

Upping

decent, but some of the shit falls off. I mean...I dunno, I can go in more detail later.

The World Around Us Lurks In Opputuinty And Dreams But Never Be Truley Breath-Taken...//
Cause As Much As You Deserve These Things You Can Always Feel Left-Mistaken...//

^^.. Real Decent Bar ..
i Liked This Lil Piece ..
it Was Solid in Some areas ..
ya Multies Were Tha Best Thing about This Drop ..
Flow Coulda Fell Off ..
But !! .. it Was Still Decent ..
Seems Like Sumptin` U Threw Together Real Quick ..

Trying To Let Go Of This World Put My Worry To Shreds And Rest-My-Tears...//
Even Though Things Seem Bad Im Heading Up And Spitting Past-My-Years...//


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Nice Drop, Not ur Best....But Still Came off Farely good