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Dominhoe aint an emcee shes just a rapper, I'll splatter her grey matter and end this chapter,

You claim to be hip hop but drive a tractor, And wear more max factor than female actors,

I am the only answer u tranny dancer, when I make u disappear like a hitman but faster,

And be sure rhythm will break your loud jaw, then rearrange your features so theyre more of an eyesore

Ugly whore think u can call me out?, you shouldn't even spit anymore just work on that pout

Blah Blah ur a Fat Cunt Just Look-at-ur-Pic ..||
Fuck Net Battles, u Should Start Usin-a-Gym ..||
ur Rhymes Are Fucking Shit, Blow-My-Dick ..||
Spittin Out My Cum's The Only Way ur Flow-is-Sick ..||
Listen, im Not Tryin, u Blatently Suck-Arse ..||
i Didn't Kno if a Newbie Came, Or a Truck-Parked ..||
Go Away, Get Back 2 Blockin Off The intersection ..||
ur So Fuckin Dumb, u Posted a Rhyme in The intro-Section ..||
This Site's Gettin Full Of Shitty Wannabes, Get This Fool-Away ..||
im Surprised u Found My Callout, On The Way i Hope u Lose-Some-Weight ..||

10th Assed Verse

domino took this hands down... anarchist u need to work on alot of things man... wordplay, multies, personals u need to master a lil bit better too... but good try... dominos just to advanced for ya bruh... ummm i'd say go battle some other people n see if u can work on all those things mentioned above

vote = domino

Vote - Domino Hands Down

Rhythm You Don't Even Know How To Write In Bars. 1 Bar = 2 Lines. Get More Creative With Your Verses, LawGix Mentioned Multies But Really Multies Aint Nothing In A Battle But It Does Enhance Your Verse A Bit As Long As You Don't Go Ape Shit With Them Like Ghost lol, Know What I'm Sayin? Over All Just Make It Less Simplistic.

Don't Take What Folks Say On Here Personal, We All Started The Same Place You're At.

flat out... good eye mac

Btw Sum1 Close This Shit Lol