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Posted: **Thu Feb 01, 2007 2:12 am**

[align=center]".. Mah Life Has No Meanin` ..
.. i Must Be Dreamin` ..
.. Why Live, if There`s No Point in Bein`.."

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.. DREaMS, Everyday i Wake Up, i Have Visions Of a Battle With Mah Self ..
.. DayDreamin` Of Tha Heavens, But Everynight it`s Like Hell ..
.. i`m afraid Of Life, So afraid i Might Fail ..
.. FAiLURE, is What Mah Dad Tells Me, Right Before He Lays a Hand ..
.. i Don`t Even Believe in God, But i`m On Mah Knees Prayin` Man ..
.. i`m afraid Of Life, So afraid i`m Sayin` Damn ..
.. REJECTiON, is What Happens When i Wanna Meet a Nice Chick ..
.. But Too Bad i`m Tall Dark & Ugly Like a Live Walkin` Night Stick ..
.. i`m afraid Of Life, So afraid i Might Flip ..
.. FUTURE, i Don`t Know Wat i Wanna Be When i Soon Grow Up ..
.. i`m Kinda Sick Wit Tha Lyrics, Maybe i Can Be a Model, To Throw Up ..
.. i`m afraid Of Life, So afraid i`ll Juss Get Chewed On Up ..
.. MEMORiES, They Began to Take Over Mah Mind With Mah Brains Command ..
.. Thoughts & Memories Clash & Began To "Get Black" & Mah Brain`s "Tha Man" ..
.. i`m afraid Of Life, So afraid i Juss Wanna Start Breakin`, Damn ..
.. DEaTH, i Lost alot Of Loved Ones, Tha Ones Pretty Dear To Mah Heart ..
.. Every Moment Of Tha Day, Mah Brotha`s Spirit is Tearin` Me apart ..
.. i`m afraid Of Life, So afraid i Won`t Be Here after Dark ..
.. LOVE, alot Of Gurls Fall in Love Wit Me, But None Of `em Trusted Me ..
.. i Let Emotions Run Deep & They Can`t Really Tell if i`m Tuff Or Weak ..
.. i`m afraid Of Life, So afraid That i Won`t Even Fuckin` Speak ..
.. ME, i`m So into Mahself, That i Don`t Care Wat U Think `cus i`m Rell ..
.. Cravin` Out Mah Heavens For Today & Juss Ready to Chalk Out Mah Hells ..
.. i`m Not afraid Of Life, Maybe i`m Juss afraid Of Mahself ..

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.. So U Tell Me ..

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".. Mah Life Has No Meanin` ..
.. i Must Be Dreamin` ..
.. Why Live, if There`s No Point in Bein`.." [/align]

Posted: **Sun Feb 04, 2007 11:26 am**

Uppin` ..

Posted: **Sun Feb 04, 2007 11:55 am**

Pretty Strait.. U Really how i Put it lol Showed More Emotion in Dis .. i Ain Seen U With This Kinda Verse... Lyke Dat Deep Shit.. But Itz Strait i Lyked
it.. Keep Doin U Lyke...

lol Linezs i Picked : .. REJECTiON, is What Happens When i Wanna Meet a Nice Chick ..
.. But Too Bad i`m Tall Dark & Ugly Like a Live Walkin` Night Stick ..
.. i`m afraid Of Life, So afraid i Might Flip ..
.. FUTURE, i Don`t Know Wat i Wanna Be When i Soon Grow Up ..
.. i`m Kinda Sick Wit Tha Lyrics, Maybe i Can Be a Model, To Throw Up ..

Posted: **Mon Feb 05, 2007 8:00 am**

i felt the emotion in this..it was a really good poem even tho its sad = (

Posted: **Tue Feb 06, 2007 4:10 am**

GoodLookin` Out Y`all ..

Posted: **Sat Feb 10, 2007 4:53 am**

ooooooooo nice ending! I like how you used a word and went off of it. Thats a genious idea lol. The emotion pours outta this piece and it's cool to see something diffrent from you. This was hawt shit for sure

Posted: **Sat Feb 10, 2007 8:40 pm**

this was a nice drop, deep stuff!

.. FUTURE, i Don`t Know Wat i Wanna Be When i Soon Grow Up ..
.. i`m Kinda Sick Wit Tha Lyrics, Maybe i Can Be a Model, To Throw Up ..

.. i Let Emotions Run Deep & They Can`t Really Tell if i`m Tuff Or Weak ..
.. i`m afraid Of Life, So afraid That i Won`t Even Fuckin` Speak ..
.. ME, i`m So into Mahself, That i Don`t Care Wat U Think `cus i`m Rell ..
.. Cravin` Out Mah Heavens For Today & Juss Ready to Chalk Out Mah Hells ..
.. i`m Not afraid Of Life, Maybe i`m Juss afraid Of Mahself ..

^^^^ liked those lines tha most!

Posted: **Tue Feb 13, 2007 2:03 am**

Good Lookin` Out On Tha Feedback Ladies ..

Posted: **Mon Feb 09, 2009 8:21 pm**

Uppin ..
Memory Lane .. Lol

Posted: **Sat Feb 21, 2009 1:55 am**

I wouldn't call it a poem, but it's not bad all the same. Nice topical.

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