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i dont know how im Feeling,Living a Life With killings,Drug Dealings and Stealing
I Cant Look Away,Cuz it Feels like im only living For Today,So i Pray
Even Thou The Lord Never Got Nothing Say,i Praise,Smoking Haze
Cuz im Going threw This Difficult Faze,Tryna Wash The pain Away,but its here to stay
Inpaitiently Waitin On Tommorow,Waitin Too See If He Still Feels Any Sorrow
Cant fix the problems Cuz nothin wont function,Cant Close my eyes cuz i see too much destruction
Ive Been Mark Too Death,With a Heartless Breath,My Life is Stress'd,Evry Day is Like a Move in Chess,I Try my Best
I Can Only Say i Try,Until The Day i Die,I will Promise to Be Wise
With My heart Open Grieve,That Only Brings Misery and Tragedys,Until I see my Majesty,
Why Cant We All Witniss The End,Is like i Dont Belive in God cuz im Living in Sin
Wondering When Can i Ever Be a Winner
I Cant close My eyes cuz all I see Is Terror,Cant Look In the Mirror,Cuz My Reflection Makes The Pain Realer
Some Times I Cry Cuz The Pain Inside,Makes Me Feel Like im Living Just To Die,But Nuttin Takes my Pride
So God All im Asking You,Is Before U Judge Me just Remember All the Shit u Put me Threw.

lol on sum 2pac shit man...lmao...not bad tho..

Cant fix the problems Cuz nothin wont function,Cant Close my eyes cuz i see too much destruction

fav line..^^

structure u already no wasnt good..besides that it was a nice drop...like i said u was on sum 2pac shit lol...nice tho -1-

Wondering When Can i Ever Be a Winner
I Cant close My eyes cuz all I see Is Terror,Cant Look In the Mirror,Cuz My Reflection Makes The Pain Realer
Some Times I Cry Cuz The Pain Inside,Makes Me Feel Like im Living Just To Die,But Nuttin Takes my Pride
So God All im Asking You,Is Before U Judge Me just Remember All the Shit u Put me Threw.

To me Them Lines Was Nice Structure was off a lil Besides that i was feelin it

need ur link too -1-

-=TraMaTiK=- wrote:lol on sum 2pac shit man...lmao...not bad tho..

Cant fix the problems Cuz nothin wont function,Cant Close my eyes cuz i see too much destruction

fav line..^^

structure u already no wasnt good..besides that it was a nice drop...like i said u was on sum 2pac shit lol...nice tho -1-

lol yea i had his vibe when i wrote that good looks.just finished listenin to his all eyes on me album

I Cant close My eyes cuz all I see Is Terror,Cant Look In the Mirror,Cuz My Reflection Makes The Pain Realer
Some Times I Cry Cuz The Pain Inside,Makes Me Feel Like im Living Just To Die,But Nuttin Takes my Pride
So God All im Asking You,Is Before U Judge Me just Remember All the Shit u Put me Threw


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^ U Basically Bit a Verse from "Who do You believe in" by Pac and Rearanged the Words a Bit....For those who dont believe DL The track....

Lmao

[Intro: 2Pac]
Let us pray
Heavenly Father, hear a nigga down here
Before I go to sleep
Tell me, who do you believe in?
Who do you believe in?

[Verse One: 2Pac]
I see mothers in black cryin, brothers in packs dyin
Plus everybody's high, too doped up to ask why
Watchin our own downfall, witness the end
It's like we don't believe in God cause we livin in sin
I asked my homie on the block why he strapped, he laughed
Pointed his pistol as the cop car passed and blast
It's just another murder, nobody mourns no more
My tear drops gettin bigger but can't figure what I'm cryin for
Is it the miniature caskets, little babies
Victims of a stray, from drug dealers gone crazy
Maybe it's just the drugs, visions of how the block was
Crack came and it was strange how it rocked us
Perhaps the underlyin fact stay high explain genocide
It's when we ride on our own kind
What is it we all fear, reflections in the mirror
We can't escape fate, the end is gettin nearer

[Chorus 2X: 2Pac]
Who do you believe in?
I put my faith in God, blessed and still breathin
And even though it's hard, that's who I believe in
Before I'm leavin, I'm askin the grievin - who do you believe in?

[Verse Two: 2Pac]
Can't close my eyes cause all I see is terror
I hate the man in the mirror
Cause his reflection makes the pain turn realer
Times of Armageddeon, murder in mass amounts
In this society where only gettin the cash counts
I started out as a beginner
Entered the criminal lifestyle became a sinner
I make my money and vacate, evade prison
Went from the chosen one to outcast, unforgiven
And all the Hennessy and weed can't hide, the pain I feel inside
You know, it's like I'm livin just to die
I fall on my knees and beg for mercy, not knowin if I'm worthy
Livin life thinkin no man can hurt me
So I'm askin -- before I lay me down to sleep
Before you judge me, look at all the shit you did to me, my misery
I rose up from the slums, made it out the flames
In my search for fame will I change? I'm askin

[Chorus]

[Verse Three: Kadafi]
Faith in Allah, believe in me and this plastic
Cause so far I done witnessed to many dead niggaz in caskets
With they chest plates stretched like elastic
And what's worse I'm on front line, holdin down camp, still mashin
Heard my cousin, one of the old heads from the block
Just came home October of '95 back in Yardsville stuck
with a three to five, if he don't act up, now he realize
If you don't stay wise, then in this game you fucked
Talk to my baby girl, give me the word on what she heard
One of the grimmies is snitchin, Diamond a stool pigeon I talked to him
He said he didn't, my man said he did, in fact he's sure
Cause he just came home off of bail

[2Pac] Now tell me

[Chorus]

he kinda paraphrased different pieces, i dunno, he was probably listneing to it when he wrote it

Still Though....He Has pac as His Avatar...You would think He Realise "Hey,Pac Says That".....Im Just Sayin