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Something I Wrote Quick.
Posted: Mon Jan 29, 2007 2:46 pm
by MesaR
http://illestlyrics.com/board/post20827.html#20827
Battled Some On Rap Royalty He Hasnt Repiled Back.
That Site Is a Pure Shit Hole First And Last Battle Dere.
kid Ill Grab Ya Tounge And Leave You "Slow-to-Speak"..//
Cause You No My Punches Are Hot And "Ya-Flow-Is-Weak..//
Battling Sequence? Im Taking You As Not The " Smartest-One"..//
My Bars Are Red Hot And A Mac 10 " Isnt-The-Largest-Gun " ..//
Kid ill Leave Ya Commiting Sins And " Death-Sores-Its-Been-Spoken"..//
Put Me In Gunnies For Kicking Your Ass cause "The-Records-Been-Broken..
macc Ill Pump Shots and slash at Your Vitals And "Stain-Ya-Back..//
Cause Ya The Realest Gangster On The Net And You Acutaly "Claim-Ya-Black..//
~ sequence ~
Posted: Mon Jan 29, 2007 2:51 pm
by Typeo
not bad, its about in the middle of the scale of good n' bad. Its not bad, its just a lil weak. Its decent though, not all of it is really multis. So it didn't need the dash's. But its got some strong points, about 1/3...
The 'My bars are hot' line, the 'grunnies' line, and the last line are my favs.
Posted: Mon Jan 29, 2007 2:58 pm
by Haz
i Think it Was Pretty Good Yo ...
U Had Metaphors N Stayed Flowin Wit Tha Multis
Propz ... Do U Kid
Fav Shit : macc Ill Pump Shots and slash at Your Vitals And "Stain-Ya-Back..//
Cause Ya The Realest Gangster On The Net And You Acutaly "Claim-Ya-Black..//
Posted: Mon Jan 29, 2007 3:11 pm
by Borat
this is fresh man... not bad at all, im not much for battle verses but for what it is... not bad keep it up "Kid ill Leave Ya Commiting Sins And " Death-Sores-Its-Been-Spoken"..//
Put Me In Gunnies For Kicking Your Ass cause "The-Records-Been-Broken.. " fav line
Posted: Mon Jan 29, 2007 3:13 pm
by Mac
macc Ill Pump Shots and slash at Your Vitals And "Stain-Ya-Back..//
I Know That Aint directed At Me..
Posted: Mon Jan 29, 2007 3:27 pm
by complexity
Pretty good man. I liked the first few bars the most.
Posted: Mon Jan 29, 2007 3:27 pm
by MesaR
No Just The Guy I battled On Rap Royalty His Name Was Mac to
Posted: Mon Jan 29, 2007 6:02 pm
by precise
sequence is still elevating, good shit bro, keep it up
Posted: Mon Jan 29, 2007 10:16 pm
by Momeijah
Word ur Gettin Better All The Time. Was Feelin This Piece. BUT ThaOneYouHate u Need 2 Stfu About Mettas Cuz They Go Over ur Fat Somalian Head And ur Standard Of Mettas is 'Chill Like ice'...'im Gnna Smoke u Like a Cigarette'..So Fuck Off Lmfao
Posted: Tue Jan 30, 2007 2:11 am
by |.R.SON.aLL.|
kid Ill Grab Ya Tounge And Leave You "Slow-to-Speak"..//
Cause You No My Punches Are Hot And "Ya-Flow-Is-Weak..//
^^ .. Tha`s Mah Favorite Shit ..
Like i Told U On MSN ..
U Gettin` Better Fam ..
Solid Piece ..
Posted: Tue Jan 30, 2007 2:53 am
by $hayne
Shit was Ill meng.. Nice Multies.
Posted: Tue Jan 30, 2007 9:10 am
by Akuma
pretty hot spit af far as key'n and multies go.. this was aimed at mac?
Posted: Tue Jan 30, 2007 10:34 am
by MesaR
No It Wasnt Amied At Mac lol.
Posted: Wed Jan 31, 2007 4:44 pm
by LadieHazard
kid Ill Grab Ya Tounge And Leave You "Slow-to-Speak"..//
Cause You No My Punches Are Hot And "Ya-Flow-Is-Weak..//
Themz lines Was hot..i like readin ya rhymes i dont lose ma self readen em
Posted: Wed Jan 31, 2007 7:23 pm
by MesaR
Thanks guys for all this feed Back couldnt be AnyMore Happy Thanks!