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Hazard Can't Vote
3-0 KO
4-1 Wins
Other Wise First To 5.

Good Luck Folks.

Ma Rhymes a Digest Ya Tongue n Release Ya Bullshit
Bitch who cares if u Sick Cus ima Blitz ya Whole Script/
i Be painted Perfect Pictures wit these Golden Verses And Scriptures
These Deadly Rhymes a sure Split Cha Wit jus one Line Theyll Rip Urs/
Ya Name May Be Blitz But im Sure Gone Tackle This this Spit
Like Joey Porter n Shit Now im The Speedy "Line Backer" That Blitz/
Ima Sick Writer Like a Disease Bitch im Hazardous to ya Health
Worse Then Child Birth without a Epaderial the worse Pain u eva Felt/
Like a Tornado Bitch ill come n Blow u away Put Chu Down in Ya Grave
Ma verse is Worth Saven Click Copy n Paste And Then File n Save/
Delete ya Personal Filez Datz Saved iM Like a Hazardous Pill Ma Side affects a Make Ya Chest raw
Stay popin These Bitchz Daily Like Zoloft Kill U in 1 Pop Like Dose Off..killin linez u'll juz ovadose braud/

Here we go….

Ya man left you for lady fiasco, cuz u couldn't impress a dude
You stay yelling lots of shit, but my 7 month old, makes more sense then you/
This girls a fat fuckin "dog", every meal she eats is "beneful"*
You better cop a tat on ya pussy reading - "caution, hazardous chemicals"/
Every time I blitz, its back n forth down a runway
The only time u blitz, is to the all you can eat buffet/
My punches hit you so hard, you'll have to find comfort killin a bowl of jello
Cuz this bitch aint got shit on me, and she got a chin like jay leno/**
I'll stalk her dreams and kick this bitch till she craps the sheets
Rip her heart outta her chest throw it back...bitch still couldn't "catch a beat"/


* beneful is a kind of dog food

** look at her myspace - http://profile.myspace.com/index.cfm?fu ... =139328206

........

that....just...happened..........

i need a few minutes before i vote, lmao that was some crazy shit....

lmmfao let me tally this shit up n see what i can come up with

omg ma ur first battle?!?!?!

Ok Start Voten Lol...

okay...

multies - i gotta go with Blitz
personals - i'll say Blitz cause she proved em by postin her myspace on here lol
wordplay - i'll say a lil bit of both but i really really feelin blitz when she did this line

I'll stalk her dreams and kick this bitch till she craps the sheets
Rip her heart outta her chest throw it back...bitch still couldn't "catch a beat"/

punches - ladie had some good ones so i'll give that to ladie

over all

heres the verses i was feelin and wasn't feelin from ladie:

i felt:
Like a Tornado Bitch ill come n Blow u away Put Chu Down in Ya Grave
Ma verse is Worth Saven Click Copy n Paste And Then File n Save/
^^^^ thats fire right there

i wasn't feelin:
Delete ya Personal Filez Datz Saved iM Like a Hazardous Pill Ma Side affects a Make Ya Chest raw
Stay popin These Bitchz Daily Like Zoloft Kill U in 1 Pop Like Dose Off..killin linez u'll juz ovadose braud/

too damn long lol if it was shorter then maybe it would have worked... i think u rushed it a lil too much...

the lines i felt and wasn't feelin from blitz are as follows:

i felt:
This girls a fat fuckin "dog", every meal she eats is "beneful"*
You better cop a tat on ya pussy reading - "caution, hazardous chemicals"/

^^^ that slayed me lol

and

Ya man left you for lady fiasco, cuz u couldn't impress a dude
You stay yelling lots of shit, but my 7 month old, makes more sense then you/

^^ crazy

i wasn't feelin:
My punches hit you so hard, you'll have to find comfort killin a bowl of jello
Cuz this bitch aint got shit on me, and she got a chin like jay leno/**

maybe if u worked it out a lil bit better... it could have worked

re-arranged and replace some words

over all tho great battle

but this one goes to Blitz

If i Cant Vote Den U cant No Crew Votes

thats fair =)

personally...both verses were dope...on both sides i saw good punches n wat not....but some parts on Ladies hazards verse werent as hard n straight up...lol...no pun intended...kinda dangled on a bit....im goin wit blitz on this one....if u got a prob wit my vote then i can explain more but...i pretty much already did...

~VIRAL

1-0 BlitZ Uppin.

lmfao...holyhelll this was actually pretty good...LOL wow..damn...good battle both yall...

Ya man left you for lady fiasco, cuz u couldn't impress a dude
You stay yelling lots of shit, but my 7 month old, makes more sense then you/
This girls a fat fuckin "dog", every meal she eats is "beneful"*
You better cop a tat on ya pussy reading - "caution, hazardous chemicals"/
Every time I blitz, its back n forth down a runway
The only time u blitz, is to the all you can eat buffet/

lmaoo^^^ blitz took it rite there...that was krazy lol props blitz...that was nice..Lady-Haz u came hard 2 but blitz seemed more constitent about in her verse...mults blitz,punches blitz...personals didnt see none from either..blitz got most the katz doe...nice battle ladies...hot shiiiiittt lol AND FUCK NELLY...i no sum1 bound'ta reference that 2 him...lmaoo anyways nice battle both u..mad props..my vote = Blitz -1-

Wow ..
That Was Some Crazy Wild ass Shit From Blitz ..
God Dayum ..
She Took Tha Battle Hands Down yo` ..
She Had Better Punches ..
Even Without `em ..
Them Personals Was Killin` That Shit ..
i`m Juss Like ............... Wow Right Now ..
Ladie-Haz U Was Koo` ..
U Juss Wasn`t Fuckin` Wit Her ..
God Damn .. Lol

3-0 KO ..

i`ll Lock This Shit Up ..