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10 Bars Whuddeva else Rules U Wan U Spit First .. Due Soon

i`m Droppin` Tomorrow ..
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[align=center]yo` .. i`m Finna Rip This Lame AGAIN ! ..
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Look,

No Way in "Hell" That ya Rhymes is Hot, ya Gurl a Diamond ??.. NOT! ..//..
Tha Nines`ll Pop, "Lead Will Go to ya Dome" Call it "Writer`s Block" ..//..
Shaz ??.. Fuck Him, He Juss a Nerd in Make Up, This Jerk is Faked Up ..//..
Hurt Him, Sprayed Pumps, He Won`t Go "Home" if He Typed Tha Button B/W "Insert & Page Up" ..//..
i Heard His Gay Stuff, i`m Not a Drama Kid, But i`ll Fuckin` Bomb ya Lid ..//..
after This Battle Of Shaz Bein` Dismandled, He Won`t "Show His Face For a Few Years" Like "Dawna Did" ..//.. *
U Can`t Even Touch Tha Flames, Like U "Playin` Football" Slugs Will "Rush ya Frame" ..//..
Wha`s Mah Name??.. R.Fiasco, When U Rap, U Get More "Slobs" Than "Dustin`s Gang" ..//..
i ain`t Gotta Really Spit, `cus This Little Nigga is Too Gay, Split Tha Nigga`s Toupe .//..
"Kick,Push" Like ya Wig is a Little Lupe, When i Read ya Rap i "Catch More Z`s" Than Tha "Letter in Tha Middle Of Tha Two A`s" ..//..
U`s a Loser Dude Plus ya Whole Fuckin` Team Sucks, None Of y`all Scream Pumps ..//..
i`m Creamed Up, Bum Tha Razor`ll Treat U Like ya "MSN Pic" & Give U a Clean Cut" ..//..
Quick acttin` Like ya Hands`ll Fly, if it Came to it i`ll Seriously Slam This Guy ..//..
"Fuckin` Loose Change" is Tha Only Time He "Rammed a Dime" He Mad `cus i`m..//..
This Hazard Guy ??.. More Losses Than ya Wins, Fuck Him Tha`s How i Handle Guys ..//..
in This Rap Shit, Hazard Will always "Have ya Head Down" Like Tha "Man Was Shy" ..//..
i Spit Tha Flames to Fags, Leave ya God Damn Dame in Bags, "Lil Dickhead" U Not "Sprayin` Mags" ..//..
Listen to Wat i`m Sayin` Fag, ya Gurl`ll Give Me Dome, U Gon` Be Surprised to See Her "Wit Knees / Whitneys" Like Tha "Name Y`all Say i Had" ..//.. **

* - His Gurl ain`t Show Her Face For a Few Years ..
** - His Gurl`s Fat ass Friend Said Mah Name Was Whitney[/align]

uppin 4 hazards verse

Uh-o i Read it Aiight Now Ima Spit

This Like "Stop Signs" Wit Material How U Rippin Me
Simliar To "Bobby Beatin Whitney b" Like a Strippin Tease Expose Who This Sissy Be/
He Raps About Gunz But Sed Hes Against Um i'll Spit Hott Flow
While ya Mom Suckin Let Cha Brain Make Sense Son/ Wit This Acid i Make Rain "Vent-Suns" Rapin Cats" With Bars Like Kulprit No Intent Done Putta Put a Hole in ya Structure Let My "2 Centz Run"/
U On Tha Fone Splittin Pussys Like Me Wit Sam But Thats Telli Service Gunz i'll Replace Beef With
Spam/ You Aint Ready Son Grow A Dick Cus Niggaz Think U Already One Cocky Like Viagra Meddyz Run/Twist Ya "Rap" Like Who Gotta Steady Blunt Neva Crack'd Heat,
Claimin U Rushed Deadly Pumpz Yea Kid When ya Momz Hadda Gas Leak /
"Rell" Dont Bring A "Hell Image" Make ya Set Dip Like Rugerz Reflect Image Kruga When Head Slittin/ Only Time U Was Twisted A Local Celebirty Was Datin A Fake Flamez on Diz Nigga Fate Like He Baked in A Cake/Rell Flipp a "Dime Piece" When He Was Datin Bri-in-Spinchat Close Ya Window Now 7 Years Olda Put Chu 6 Feet Deep Whud Kinda "SHIT U INTO NOW?"/
All Typaz Scripts Undaground We Kno U "fertal Bound" Get Ripped Pussy Snipped Push in ya Back N ya Stomack Mergin Out/

- Some People Know Him As Whitney
- Hes Against Gunz
- Piece OF Name Rell ( Hell Rell ) - Dipset
- He Dated Girl Name Local Celebirty
- Dated A Chick Name Dime Piece ...

imo A Battled Vote Is Mainly Focused On Punchlines And Personals.

Rell Took Punchlines Hands Down.
Hazard Took Personals Hands Down.

So That Forces Votes Upon...

Structure - Which Rell Swept
Multies - Which Rell Swept
Nameplay - I'm Gonna Give It To Rell..I'll Explain
Entertainment - Rell..His Verse Flowed Together Better As Well

Nameplay Reason(s):
"Kick,Push" Like ya Wig is a Little Lupe, When i Read ya Rap i "Catch More Z`s" Than Tha "Letter in Tha Middle Of Tha Two A`s" ..//..

^^sick foreal.

Overall - Hazard, You've Got A Lot Of Advice Man. Just Keep Working On Your Flow In General, Drop Some Shit In Scriptures For A Minute And Adapt That Way Then Start Battling. Join My Crew Or Something, We'll Help You. But Word My Vote Lies With Rell Man.

I Told You Hazard I Hate Voting Against You Cuz It Gets Old After 15 Times Or So lol. But My Votes Are Always Fair So It Is What It Is.

thaoneyouhate your vote wont be counted for numerous reasons..just to name 2

1.you and rell were or are beefing
2.i was informed that you want rell to lose cause he wins too much.

Dats Bullshit ^^^ Dat Shit iz Made Up Wdf itz Slander Nigga ... lol How u Gunna Use it Against Him N How Was Dey Beefin Dey Jus Battle Er One Battlez

U Can`t Even Touch Tha Flames, Like U "Playin` Football" Slugs Will "Rush ya Frame" ..//..
Wha`s Mah Name??.. R.Fiasco, When U Rap, U Get More "Slobs" Than "Dustin`s Gang" ../


hot ass bar from rell ^^^

While ya Mom Suckin Let Cha Brain Make Sense Son/ Wit This Acid i Make Rain "Vent-Suns" Rapin Cats" With Bars Like Kulprit No Intent Done Putta Put a Hole in ya Structure Let My "2 Centz Run"/

nice shit from shaz^^^

but i think rell took it mainly cuz it was more entertaining..shaz ur verse was kinda like..idk mono-tone in'a way...i seen better from u...but my vote = Rell -1-

2-0 ..
Uppin` ..

Personals- Hazard
Punches- Rell
Structure- Rell
Multis- Tied
Wordplay- Rell
Flow- Rell

overall - Rell, hazard you really have to work on your wording you seemed to have improved it a little bit but you still write in broken english with half your bars


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