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posted this on like two sites and only got

"hey this is good .. leave feed here"
" yeah man im feel'n it"

i want actuall critisism if possible
along with feed ... this is a debateable topic as well ... and could very well be
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"In the beginning God created the heavens and the earth"

.....Come, "let Us go down" and there confuse their language,
so that they will not understand one another's speech

Genesis 6:4 There were giants in the earth in those days; and also after that, when the sons of God came in unto the daughters of men,
and they bare children to them, the same became mighty men which were of old, men of renown.

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The Sons Of God
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" For I came down from heaven, not to do mine own will,
but the will of him that sent me" John 6:38"

we decent from the heavens, pass'n leagues of gates
our only goal is to make sure man can see the day,
immortality isnt'n a problem for higher beings,....
wit no "reproductive organs",use strands of D.N.A


we fly lookin for beings ahead of the conscious
but its stress full and we fed up with nonsense
all we found was apes and we dreaded the concept
luckily for us, preadamic man sped up the prossess


now complete, man learns where tha spirit is
his inner light speaks with words of experience
they been placed in time to learn what existance is
in a protected area to preserve the experiment


so i go back to my seat in time and space
wish'n man builds a higher conscious inside they brain
still watch'n mans activities, for signs of faith
nothing is happending yet, but times will changed

""Now the man has become like one of us, having knowledge of good and evil;
and now if he puts out his hand and takes of the fruit of the tree of life, he will go on living for ever."

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A Very Very Long Time Later
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as i sit on my infinate throne,wish'n a existance wasmore
make'n man how i wanted it, witness my vision unfold
man sprung up over night, shit it was fillin the globe!
so i cast back down to see tha villagers build'n in stone


back in the day we used to come greet'n em,love meet'n em
know'n we gods, that come'n to the earth & begun teach'n em
after awile,.... we arranged times come and speak to them
show'n them our worlds as they come and peek the lens


then along came some giants, raged in violence
took the land as they please and staged defiance
tower'n man, stand'n something like 8 foot 9 and
i was there when the human, David slay'd Galiath


man was inspired, shortly after as his statue standed
that was only the beginning of tha path that man digs
they went crazy before the atlas cracked and land split
but we knew this way before our crafts had landed


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A Very Long Time Later
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since the darkages an evil will tried erase'n history
turn'n man ingorant, .......now he make'n myths of me
man saw our pyrimids and purposely claimed it mystery
and has now claims me and my "race are fiction beings"


now they lauch'n they technology out in space n stuff
got every form drug from cigarettes to angel dust
we reveal ourselfs still, but theres a new name for us
new alias, man forgot we're Gods Sons & calls us aliens


they try to swat us from the skys, yellin i dont wanna die
our creations turned against us,forever fall'n from the lies
twisted tails of our exsitence spawn'n alter'd vision'd minds
ingorance is bliss, and the truths hard to swollow in suprise


in our book, revelations tells how the "rapture unspins"
how we were here once, and we come'n back in the ships
with beams of light take'n believers to the lands above men
come'n from the heavens man might call it "mass abduction"

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Dec. 21 2012
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now complete, man learns where tha spirit is
his inner light speaks with words of experience
they been placed in time to learn what existance is
in a protected area to preserve the experiment

fav part homie..^^^ overall nice piece diff from most ppl tho nice...overall it was hot...is it goin on audio?

most def. .. that was the purpose .. i'll post up an audio to another song shortly

thanx alot 4 read'n this

i'll post up some videos later
its my basis of the type of spit this is

u need to post a link where you've given feedback...in order to get feedback

makes sense

post a link, and ill leave feed....

^LFMAO... haha damn

j/p its at the top

Dis Was Hott .. i Cant Really Critisize it Because
i Feel You Made Sense Your Multis Flowed Thru
it Was Creative 9/10 ...

Mos Liked Part : we fly lookin for beings ahead of the conscious
but its stress full and we fed up with nonsense
all we found was apes and we dreaded the concept
luckily for us, preadamic man sped up the prossess

werd thanx alot .. im feel'n tha feed ..


Everyone gohead and leave links and i'll get yall back

yeah man that was pritty dope keep it up.

yea i dig this solid flow


in our book, revelations tells how the "rapture unspins"
how we were here once, and we come'n back in the ships
with beams of light take'n believers to the lands above men
come'n from the heavens man might call it "mass abduction"

fav lines^^

im waitin for the day my brother.

Uppin

-- Sun Dec 05, 2010 1:04 am --

btw i've got the audio redone and mastered but its on a dead site

i'll have to do it when i get the chance .. a few words are dif. thats about it

Literally u made me feel everything in the linesll wouldnt change anything in this good flow like the way u opened it up and just dropped into it went perfect

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