Introduce yourself
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- Immortal Jav
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Re: Introduce yourself
my rhymes are self-explanatory
- M33Kish
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Re: Introduce yourself
Hi, I'm the embodiment of everything hip, I'm pretty new to this,
But my slick sick keyboard articulate, even shows on my name, take 33 clicks,
For-never yours, win-never in letters, weak shits...
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But my slick sick keyboard articulate, even shows on my name, take 33 clicks,
For-never yours, win-never in letters, weak shits...
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The Meek Shall Prosper... So they say :P
- Tulip Grim
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Re: Introduce yourself
I used to do this way back, it's been a minute. Went away for a while and didn't have a computer, but I've been searching online every couple years from some of the guys from my forum back in the day... it's been 7 or so years now. Hopin to get back into this. I don't know how to do audio but I'm tryna figure it out.
- MrNovember
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Re: Introduce yourself
Yo wassup everyone. Im new, wanted to join up with a site like this, checked it out before I joined and yall seem like a legit rap forum to stay with. I been gettin into rap around 2009 when I went to college, and started to really get into it (listening) from "The Warmup" by J.Cole. It revived my interest in getting into rapping, and my first favorite albums were The Eminem Show and The Black Album. Ima start gettin more writtens on this site, look forward to finally getting into rap.
I wrote this one last week, still tryna practice though. I was listening to Kendrick Lamar "Opposites Attract", and the first line is based on that so I remembered.
We hurt people that love us and love people that hurt us
It would seem to follow your dreams, You gotta lift up them curtains
Shed some light on the darkness in your life, you
Pretend that you're righteous, so everyone likes you
Get a little money and change up your sights
Get nervous soon as it starts getting tight
Gotta stay on track, cuz when stuff gets wack
then you might go back to that broke ass life.
Then its back to no love, usin drugs
You have enough, so you grab a gun
You play stupid just to raise your funds
Feeling useless, hated, and dumb.
Wishing that reality was all a bad dream
You would sell your soul just to never be broke again.
I wrote this one last week, still tryna practice though. I was listening to Kendrick Lamar "Opposites Attract", and the first line is based on that so I remembered.
We hurt people that love us and love people that hurt us
It would seem to follow your dreams, You gotta lift up them curtains
Shed some light on the darkness in your life, you
Pretend that you're righteous, so everyone likes you
Get a little money and change up your sights
Get nervous soon as it starts getting tight
Gotta stay on track, cuz when stuff gets wack
then you might go back to that broke ass life.
Then its back to no love, usin drugs
You have enough, so you grab a gun
You play stupid just to raise your funds
Feeling useless, hated, and dumb.
Wishing that reality was all a bad dream
You would sell your soul just to never be broke again.
- M-Mature Boy
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Re: Introduce yourself
whats up every1! im ready to start knockin people off 1 by 1, hell mayb 2 by 2 its all good. i 'll battle the whole forum n 1 day. Na anyways how u start battlin on here?? how many post u need to have?
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Re: Introduce yourself
M to the I to the double T-Y, eyes stay low so you know I stay /
Just stopping by to drop some lines, I thought I'd say hi/
And show y'all how a white boy does his and stays fly/
I'm making it ain't no stopping although that they try/
They don't succeed, I beat 'em mentally and continue to proceed/
On with pumping out lyrics now I'm making these beats/
Bringing the heat, fresher than out the dryer with the sheets/
This is the way my brain works every day of the week/
8 bars
Just stopping by to drop some lines, I thought I'd say hi/
And show y'all how a white boy does his and stays fly/
I'm making it ain't no stopping although that they try/
They don't succeed, I beat 'em mentally and continue to proceed/
On with pumping out lyrics now I'm making these beats/
Bringing the heat, fresher than out the dryer with the sheets/
This is the way my brain works every day of the week/
8 bars
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- Kuhlerblynd
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Re: Introduce yourself
That looks like 8 lines. 8 bars would be sixteen lines, actually.
Welcome. Keep elevating.
Welcome. Keep elevating.
Re: Introduce yourself
Depends on how the beat is broken down. Each comma indicates a break creating a new line...8 bars.
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Re: Introduce yourself
Waddup people?
Been writing poetry since I was a kid, and about a year ago I also started writing rhymes. Haven't had the chance to record anything worth recording yet, but I'm trying to shake something up.
Peace.
When I relapse, turn up the heat,
With my saliva drippin' all over the beat,
Snare trapped,
Guess you went in too deep and now cornered knee deep in dreams you couldn't fathom,
Guess I'll better rephrase,
Nighmares clad in patterns so insane they'll have you throwin' spasms
Just trying to grasp onto what little sanity is left in a wicked world so sickly dressed in sickly stress,
Repressed victims regress to whatever's left of their hollowed-out dreams,
Depressed you'll kneel to a bittersweet entity of an evil intent laid to rest deeply within, no more repenting - sin's now pouring free.
Been writing poetry since I was a kid, and about a year ago I also started writing rhymes. Haven't had the chance to record anything worth recording yet, but I'm trying to shake something up.
Peace.
When I relapse, turn up the heat,
With my saliva drippin' all over the beat,
Snare trapped,
Guess you went in too deep and now cornered knee deep in dreams you couldn't fathom,
Guess I'll better rephrase,
Nighmares clad in patterns so insane they'll have you throwin' spasms
Just trying to grasp onto what little sanity is left in a wicked world so sickly dressed in sickly stress,
Repressed victims regress to whatever's left of their hollowed-out dreams,
Depressed you'll kneel to a bittersweet entity of an evil intent laid to rest deeply within, no more repenting - sin's now pouring free.
Re: Introduce yourself
Well, I'm new...I'll drop a few bars I guess!
Btw, I just like to battle...so mostly punches comin' from me (:
As I said I'm new, so thanks for the welcome to the site
n' whoevers my first victim, someone help em' with a knife
Or I'll melt em' with a right/write n' I ain't talkin bout a punch
Cause when my words hit his chest, I'll have em' coughin out his lungs
Makin' a hitlist n' crossin' out the chumps, now whos first to get X'd!?
Sicker than fresh meth, n' it ain't a foul in basketball when I send techs/text
Ahh just a lil keystyle, sup all.
Btw, I just like to battle...so mostly punches comin' from me (:
As I said I'm new, so thanks for the welcome to the site
n' whoevers my first victim, someone help em' with a knife
Or I'll melt em' with a right/write n' I ain't talkin bout a punch
Cause when my words hit his chest, I'll have em' coughin out his lungs
Makin' a hitlist n' crossin' out the chumps, now whos first to get X'd!?
Sicker than fresh meth, n' it ain't a foul in basketball when I send techs/text
Ahh just a lil keystyle, sup all.
- EcKsTaSy
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Re: Introduce yourself
lol at domino
- Anthony Mitchell
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Re: Introduce yourself
I wanted to say that i'm new to the site/
came in when the time is right/ if i drink
a can of that red bull-ish i'll be up all
night/ chillaxing at the crib watching porno
laying the pipe down to your wife/ or your girl
rocking her world the flow is crime i should go
to jail/ at the end of the battle i will prevell
at the crib not doing anything tonight/ just wanted
to welcome myself to the site/
came in when the time is right/ if i drink
a can of that red bull-ish i'll be up all
night/ chillaxing at the crib watching porno
laying the pipe down to your wife/ or your girl
rocking her world the flow is crime i should go
to jail/ at the end of the battle i will prevell
at the crib not doing anything tonight/ just wanted
to welcome myself to the site/
- MelissaDaisy99
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Re: Introduce yourself
Hello !
I am a new member. My name is Melissa Daisy and I like to say thanks to the site owner for this great site and all the members of this forum for sharing good and useful information to all people.
I found this forum quite informative as well interested, it is really great!
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I am a new member. My name is Melissa Daisy and I like to say thanks to the site owner for this great site and all the members of this forum for sharing good and useful information to all people.
I found this forum quite informative as well interested, it is really great!
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- Ambiguous Realm
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Re: Introduce yourself
hello to both of you, and illestlyrics thanks you for the acknowledgement melissa, feel free to post any of your own material or get involved in other areas, the shoutbox also welcomes anyone who wants to chat
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