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im spittin first you ready nigga?

yea man spit ya game ohh yea nigga one rule NO BITTING

yo listen little nigga you not really a street creepa/
you mad cuz you trash and couldnt barrow dat beat neither/see ima tell people da truth/dis meat beater is through/his hot breath a be the only heat in the booth/while you catching skeet by ya tooth/im speedin in coupes/doin a buck, leavin the troops/i bet rell a do you in da butt you eatin it too?/you getting pumped thinkin you a diva in boots/i get pumps when i cop heaters to shoot/you get lunched(yall see how im eatin this fruit)/nothin like eve in the garden/ im more like jesus im starvin/ these hatin creeps wanna see me as a carcus/both of yall garbage/and it dont matter what you say/cuz creepa>you gay/and rell>u just a fake ass lupe
OVER!

Ayo you a biter like most niggaz that can even handle a group cypher im accused of killin you thats why im on tha front page/
*THE NEW NEIGHBORHOOD SNIPA* the flows i speak are serious more venamous like a viper but can't dodge cuz you slow//
in tha head -thinkin we dumb-u betta off eatin frost in ya freezer yo nigga *IM BASIC* but betta and well you just a skeezer/
The sickest diss flow of jay memorize thos cat and see if you can bite that im finshed im done playin nigga im pissed you shoulda//
fucked off when i caught ya slippin now i gotta rip you cuz you think you gotta big-lip-and you think got balls you dun know tha half of it/
im not finshed yet cuz i have more to tell nigga yo whack ass ryhmes are *a-sand-bitches-ass* that can't be slaped//
im-straped-wit-gats eva one say's it but im tru unlike you wanna-be wu-tang-clan nigga step it up when you talk shit/
cuz now i gotta bust like its my fuckin turn again lame ass bitch claimin you got nutz saggin//
but im close to tha westcoast blow ready and fist shinin like a car show nigga step back ima showa ya how to finsh real man shit/
*Jay Killah i bleed rain on ya but nigga i killed-ya ani't no thang when im rappin a mirror jus reflects and shatters ya Soul and now you have a reason to FEAR me i killed it so take the lights off me cuz i might have to bust again iight//

Punchlines: Both Was Weak (Street Creepa)
Metaphors : None
Multis: Weak ( Jay Killah)
Wordplay & Nameplay : None
Structure & Flow : None
Personals : Street Creepa

Obviously Street Creepa Won Dis Dough ..
More Punchlines .. N He Hanged Jay Fa Tha Wutang
Thing So Dats A Personal ... 1-0 Uppin For Votes

Wow..........

In some fucked up way this was a "battle"
not too much to say about it, but sense i could make sense outta Gay Fellahs verse more than
Skeet Eata's verse

My Vote: Gay Fellahs
Jay Killah (jus playin homie)

i bet rell a do you in da butt you eatin it too?/

Wdf ??..
U Bodyin` yaSelf Right Now yo` ..
U Do Know That Right ??..

OMG ..
This is Tha Weakest Battle i`ve Ever Read ..
i Can`t Even Follow Street`s Follow ..
`cus He Can`t Write a Fuckin` Bar ..
& Jay Killah Juss Fuckin` Sucks ..
Both Of Y`all Was Lame ..
So i Give it a Tie ..

shit LMAO i never thought a battle could end up like this but I agree with rell you both tie in the hall of wackness.

votes are 2-1
2 tied votes

LMFAO........No Comment.

Vote-Jay Killah Hands Down.

Structure Is A Big Issue, But When I Split It Up In A Better Form I Was Able To Read It Better..

StreetCreepa Is Wack As Fuck, And That's On Some Real Shit. Even Putting It In Better Form It Was Still Wack.

2-2 and uppin


^^^^amen brother amen to that^^^^

Ova Dose wrote:Well im going to say StreetCreepa Only beacsue i live with him and that i understand his battle style sooo give him a chance Lol you never seen nothing from him yet he's got mad potential so i guess 3-0 and upping

^^^^^Discard That Vote..wtf

LMAO LMAO LMAO LMAO ......
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