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Posted: **Tue Jan 23, 2007 11:37 am**

i Feel Like im Standin Infront Of A Judge Tha Way im Accused
Ha Heart Infront Of A Budge Tha Way Its Abused, Broken Up/
He Brought Ha To White Clouds Way New Like Smokin Budd
Chokin Up Wrapped in His Hands Her Always in A Trippin Stance/
She Thinkin Bout Fleein Leavin Maybe His Act Will Get Cleaned Quick
Hand Posted on a Cleanix , Jaw Strait Like A Teeth Fix No Remix/
She Gets Numb Wit Out ha Life She Dun Mind Dumb Stop Cryin Hun
Repeated From Ha Spine Up "Stand-Strong" Keep Goin if Ya Man Gone/
Wipe Ya Tears "i Dont Undastand Why He Gone So Damn Long
Playin Me Like a Deck A Cards" But His Love Fa U Extra Large/
Wit Him Heaven Starts Big Thangs Yea Protect Ha Guard Sex Wit Heart
True Love He Had Ha in A Spell Like Abra Kadabra Till He Stabbed Ha N Jabbed Ha/
Went Out Wit His Crew Of Rappas She Did Tha Same But Regrets it Now
He Got His Head Fixed Like "Cranium Replacement" Senses Found Learned My Lesson now/
i'll Do it How You want Emotion Wit Some Potion Get Drunk Gettin Stuck in This "Pose Hit"
Shes Back in His Grip Wantin What He Promised.. She Feels Lifes A Lie Not Knowin if He is Honest/

Posted: **Tue Jan 23, 2007 11:59 am**

Damn babie thas tite real deep too keep it up daddie

Posted: **Tue Jan 23, 2007 12:01 pm**

hahahahahahahaha now thats the one who should suck your dick CONGRAGULATIONS!

Posted: **Tue Jan 23, 2007 1:10 pm**

Wdf Is Wid Your Random Posts Man?

Posted: **Tue Jan 23, 2007 4:03 pm**

okay my fault lets just stop dis dumbass shit now you just dont mention my name in none of yo battles no more okay?

Posted: **Tue Jan 23, 2007 10:59 pm**

Lol Shaz ur Structure is a Whole Lot Better n Clearer, Good Shit Man Keep it Up

Posted: **Wed Jan 24, 2007 1:35 am**

Thanks Domino Good Lookin Wid Da Feed Back

Posted: **Wed Jan 24, 2007 1:49 am**

i agree with jon... your structure is improving... keep elevating man... as for the poem "Repeated From Ha Spine Up "Stand-Strong" Keep Goin if Ya Man Gone/
Wipe Ya Tears "i Dont Undastand Why He Gone So Damn Long" <favorite line... overall nice drop keep em coming... peace

Posted: **Wed Jan 24, 2007 1:50 am**

Aiight Depth Thanks For Tha Feed Man

Posted: **Wed Jan 24, 2007 2:00 am**

like i said befo babieboi this was deep thats
whassup i seen some good punches structure
was good it had a emotional concept from the
start

Posted: **Wed Jan 24, 2007 4:18 am**

oh an By the way J Killah i Already did =o]....Last Nite n the nite b4 that n the nite b4 that so0o

Posted: **Wed Jan 24, 2007 10:40 pm**

2 be honest shaz it was ight...structure definetly improved but i seen betta from u tho..its all good tho notta bad piece -1-

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