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Aiight 10 - 12 Bars? N i Spit Firs .. Dats Fine
i'll Get To it Ina Lil

This Kid Bein A Problem i'll Fix it Like Boot Camp Take Ya Fate
You'll Be Chopped Up in Chunks in a Food Stance Haz Ate Tha Plate/
Bagged ***GHOST*** Like Scarin Groceries "Pushin Flames" not when i break Ya Heart Piece
Replace Each Tube Till i Remake ya heart Beat Silenced But i "Beat-You-Hardly"/
"Put A Stinga Thru ya Chest" Like JESUS AUSSIES.. im Hear To "Show A Fake" Like Regis Taught Me
You Know You've Been "Sighted" If Theres Ghost Storys i'll Split You in Half Like u Grow Horny/
Couldnt Blow Heat Head N Stoves When i "Bined-Ya" i'll "Screen-Ghost-Green" Like Slima
Behind His Computer "Throwin-Up-Hazard" im Stoppin u From Flyin like Holdin up Matter/
Blowin You Backwards You'll Be A Human Repeated, This Dood Wants To Die?
Influence Just Needed Spit Fluids Till Leakin "Light Lines" While your Speakin Like Coke Sequence/
You A Ghost To Women Ya Ho See Men My Flowa Hot Den Semen When im Leavin
These Walls, i Pitch Mo Lines Then 8's You A Swimmer Ain "Competin These Balls"/
Ain Seein These Bars Like You in The Surburbs Movin Wit ya College Careeer
Toast This Bastard "Ghost in A Caskit" im Feeelin Sorrry Like Apology Here/
Aint Touchin Me Rememba U Ghost Everythin in Cycle Like Decemba Wit Coke
Bringin Summa Heat Puttin it To ya Face "Sweat Me Ghost" Prove U Human/
Like Writen Phone Sex Post a "Text-Beat-Note" Techs Leave Holes Like TNT
Heaven When u Defeatin Me in "Catchin-Stars", Make U My BITCH Stretched in bars/
You Know Tha Ghost Will Get Beat Like "Busters Series On Replay"
Gettin Caught Up Cocky Like Fuckin Hairy in Three-Ways Ain Da Best/
Neva "COCKED BACK" A Gay Man Could Rape Ya Rep This Guys Writins Garbage Like He Ate His Taste
Jay Killah Wants A Place Wit His Daddy, This Like Ya Dildo Fuckin When My Strap Meet/
Leave You Half Meat Half Cut Like "Track-Meets" N Mass Cut White in pieces
Puttin Ghost Back in His Place Dont Touch Pencilz couldnt "Write in Pieces"/

No Need to Read yuh Verse, I'll leave yuh Heat Dispursed,
Till you Seem Disturbed from a sudden halt to a Sleek Reverse//
This Geeks a Nerd so Breech yuh Work as I Preach the Word,
Of the Defeat in Thirds so I Feed the First urge as I emerged to Seize yuh Surge//
Your Rhymes be “makin no senseâ€

Nice Battle To Begin With..

Punches: Hazard, They Was Weak Though
Metas: Ghost
Wordplay: Ghost
Personals: None
Similies: Hazard
Structure: Ghost

Over All: Ghost Came With a Better Verse imo To Me A Lot Of Hazards Shit Don't Make Sense I Even Read It Like 5 Times lol. Hazard Would Of Definately Took This If He Made More Sense, Cuz He Was More Consistent With Disses.

Aint Touchin Me Rememba U Ghost Everythin in Cycle Like Decemba Wit Coke
Bringin Summa Heat Puttin it To ya Face "Sweat Me Ghost" Prove U Human/
Like Writen Phone Sex Post a "Text-Beat-Note" Techs Leave Holes Like TNT

^^ .. This Shit ain`t Rhyme ..
Maybe it`s Juss Me ..
Tha Third Line Was Tha Only Line That Made Sense ..

Punches - Hazard .. Even Though, Some Of Them Didn`t Make Sense .. Tha Ones That Did Make Sense Were Better Than Ghost ..
Metas - Ghost .. Way Better in This Cat ..
Multies - Ghost Came Better & it Flowed Better .. They Made Sense Too ..
Personals/Nameplay - Hazard Used His Name Hella Good in This Verse ..
Structure & Flow - Ghost .. Easier to Read & Follow ..

Overall - Ghost .. Better Verse ..

.POiNT BLaNK.

no shit shirlock, weve determined this already... he doesnt need to vote on this

Somebody Clear This Thread For The Second Time Today.

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yeah this was a decent battle.

hazard:

you came alright with multis, more in some parts. You were attempting munches but i dont think any really hit that good. There weren't that many quotables. I would just work on the strength of the punches.

ghost:

This Geeks a Nerd so Breech yuh Work as I Preach the Word,
Of the Defeat in Thirds so I Feed the First urge as I emerged to Seize yuh Surge//
Your Rhymes be “makin no senseâ€

Jay killah second time ive done this now , the reason you're not allowed to vote is because you are new and we dont know you enough to determine whether you have enough fuckin brain cells to vote thank you. that was rule number 11.

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subsist why clutter our battle forum wit your opinion if your not gonna vote....

as long as u can explain ur vote i dont think it matters how new u r.. but i never seen his post so i can't say for now

ghost won this overall.. little explaination needed.. it flows alot nicer.. more multis.. and made more sense.. personally i thought it was one sided from the start lol

4-1 Uppin 4 Voters

thats exactly what i said but im "so called" to dumb to vote!