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With death arrivin an bodies Multi-Plyin,
You gotta resort to guns like It's All-Reliance,
Got ya wrist contorted an Forced-to-Buy-Em'
An now a days it's hard not to Resort-To-Violence,
So Folks Turn to nine to five'n as a Retort-To-Find-Em'
With the Morgue-Dividing this course is Horrifyin,
As ya Forced to Enforce-the-Iron but Of Course,
There's a Force like The Star Wars to Deny-Em'
But I guess in disputes it's easier to pull a Nine-Out,
An it's crazy how you can lose ya life over a Rhyme-Now,
But.... I Spose That's Just The Way Life Goes,
At any minute any second ya Life just Might Fold//

Everybody Hates Bitches, But Bitches-Are-All-Around ..||
Sometimes it Takes Just a Bump Then, Stitches-Across-ur-Mouth ..||
Sometimes Not Even That, We Come From a Past-Of-Bloodthirst ..||
Humans Evolved is Some Ways, But We're Still a Pack-Of-Vultures ..||
a City-Kid Surrounded By The Biggest idiots, But Happy-With-Life ..||
i Used To Carry-My-Knife Always Up To Attack-When-it's-Right ..||
Annoying When u Come Across The Dull Type Like 'My Life-is-Shit' ..||
Do Somethin About it, Lighten-it And Fight-The-Shit ..||
i Used 2 Walk With Chips On My Shoulder And a Tightened-Fist ..||
Someone Ever Did Me Harm id Then Lose it And Strike-And-Hit ..||
Now its Pointless, Regardless Of My Surroundings, ill Never Sink-in-Em ..||
Livin-in Violence is Everywhere, The Strongest Never Give-it-in And Live-in-Sin ..||

Hott Shiit Mac N Domino ...
Multis Were Strong From Both
Stayed On The Same Kind Of Concept i Felt it
Good Shit 8/10

dope, very good for sure, and short enuff that i didnt lose interest like i usually do with collabs lol. nice consistent multies, good topic n story carried through it, good drop

This shit was Hot, both of you stayed on topic wit each others verses, nice shit yall...

thanks folks

Uppin.......

that shit was nice ya'll are some nice rappers

jsut wondering who wrote which verse?


anyway.. not important really, just curious! good flow and vocab.. kept yaself well on topic.. it's tight drop fellas!


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i Used 2 Walk With Chips On My Shoulder And a Tightened-Fist ..||
Someone Ever Did Me Harm id Then Lose it And Strike-And-Hit ..||

So Folks Turn to nine to five'n as a Retort-To-Find-Em'
With the Morgue-Dividing this course is Horrifyin,
As ya Forced to Enforce-the-Iron but Of Course,
There's a Force like The Star Wars to Deny-Em'

Good work guys nice to see youve been improving
8/10 who ever wrote the first verse nice rhyme scheme

Thanks For The Feed Every1. And Just For The Ppl Wondering. 1st Verse = Mac. Second = Me.
Peace

Yeah Thanks For The Feed Back Folks. Much Appreciated.