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Posted: **Tue Jan 16, 2007 12:50 pm**

[font=Verdana]Cut me to the quick, with honesty your blade
For long has my still heart, begged to be remade
Destroy the dark in me, rip the hatred from my tounge
I demand the impossible, and through You, will see it done
My mind screams against this, it's suffered already, so much
Im not ready - barely willing, but I need your healing touch
Build your light in me, let no dark survive
Scorch me with your burning love, or i shall surely die~[/font]

Posted: **Tue Jan 16, 2007 1:02 pm**

Pretty good

"Destroy the dark in me, rip the hatred from my tounge "

Great line"

"Build your light in me, let no dark survive
Scorch me with your burning love, or i shall surely die~"

like that too.

Solid little peace. A little to short though.

Posted: **Tue Jan 16, 2007 1:07 pm**

Yah i Think The Same Lines Stood Out But The Last 1 Also Did For Me. Better Than The Last Poem i'd Say. Keep Droppin

Posted: **Tue Jan 16, 2007 2:17 pm**

thank you...i was just fucking around and got tired so i cut it short

Posted: **Tue Jan 16, 2007 2:27 pm**

Yea Diz Was Good ... i Like it

I demand the impossible, and through You, will see it done
My mind screams against this, it's suffered already, so much
Im not ready - barely willing, but I need your healing touch << Fav Linez

Posted: **Tue Jan 16, 2007 3:47 pm**

solid piece... the length of it dosn't really bother me... you did good for the length of it..."Build your light in me, let no dark survive " favorite line... all in all good drop keep it up

Posted: **Tue Jan 16, 2007 9:35 pm**

great piece...everybody already picked ou the good lines ya no..keep droppin and get @ me on msn so we cud finish our collab ma..stay droppin -1-

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