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poem i made while watchin sum horror movie

its said everyone has there inner secret
and soemtimes one side of you dont wanna keep it
it knaws at ur brain and calls out ur name
until u get weak in the knees, and fall in the rain
pick urself but remain 'happy' around children
when in reality ur about'ta crumble like an old buildin
nothin seems real but this is somethin ya gotta conceal
and only reveal if u think ur heart will eventually heal
if u dont think it will u will begin ta lose hope
eyes become blurry and mind thinkin 'how am i gonna cope'
so u start cursin and thinkin ur a real rebel
but as its told,every person has there own devil

thank you for posting a link... and i like this topic alot, yet i feel its missing something, i can't pinpoint it... but its missing it, but you did alright with it, if you don't mind maybe i could do something with this topic...

naw man be my guest..open 4 opinions n changes always..