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House Rules, 10 Bars, No Flippin, Dickridin Votes. Due Within 2 Days Unless u Have a Setback

Around My Dick ya Lipz Locked,Verse Let ya Lid Flip,Drop Hot Make ya Top Open Like Pop-Rockz//
Pound 4 Pound I Spit Roundz,Witness ya Flesh Drip Down,az Flamez Leave ya Crisp-Brown//
I hear ya Cry,Uh-Oo Like Chris-Brown,Mouth Shut Bound Tight,Devour ya Mind az Verbal Roundz Fly//
Tippin Tha Scalez,Well Rounded,Ya Status Fallz Like 'Dominoz',On Text Tha Damage iz Large Imagine Audioz!//
Audios,I Breath Ether,Either Way U Try u Could Never Catch Me Slippin or Fallin Neither Ay//
Fist Strike Quicker than ya Receiver-Playz,Defeat Speakz Or So My Heater-Say,See-Ya-Tre//
The Real Ripper Ripped Em,Continuous Stitchinz Fixin ya Skinz Glitches,Glempsin Into War//
Leave the Color Crimson 2 Cover Floors,Im Curious Az to How You'll Reply,Seein az There in No Re-try//Paramedics Race to Get ya Heart Revived,im Designed With Sick Thoughtz Devized With Delight//
Ya Deprived Of Feed,Feel Free to Speak on Me,I'll Spill Food For Thought,Taught to Knock Ya Top Off

Think Somebody Should Explain That A Bar Is 2 Lines, Not One...

ill Do 5 Bars Aswell Then, With Long Lines So its Equal.

Listen, This Ain't a Battle it's a Wake, ur Rappin's-Shit, So Settle-Down ..||
i Seen Better-Clowns, Get Make Up, Lookin Like 'Fat Bastard' Shed Some Heavy-Pounds ..||
u Gtta 'Slow Things Down' Cuz Beatin Me is a 'Suicidal-Dream' ..||
Can't Even Rep Yourself, ur That Wack, No Wonder u-Just-Write-For-Free ..||
i Don't Respect-u-Though, ur Terrible i Piss-a-Better-Flow ..||
u Rappin's More Pointless Than Tapping in a Dissconnected-Phone ..||
ur Battling Record? u 'Slid Down More Polls' Than Jenna-Jameson ..||
You'll Never-Take-Me-Son, Not Even ur 'Big' Words Will Save-u-Nope ..||
it's Funny, u Use 'Big' Words Still Come Up Short, And Get Small-Respect ..||
Especially When u Rap About Fucking Girls And Have Not-Had-Sex ..||

Just a Quick Key Since He Dropped Already

** 'Slow Things Down' And 'Suicidal Dreams' Are Names Of 2 Of His Songs

Domino wrote: i Don't Respect-u-Though, ur Terrible i Piss-a-Better-Flow ..||
u Rappin's More Pointless Than Tapping in a Dissconnected-Phone ..||

best bar i thought..domino took this i think..the other dude did have sum nice punches n shit ye..but domino just hit home with that bar i thought..wasnt the best in the verse..but enough ta shut em out..good shit bout of u..vote = Domino -1-

Flow : Domino
Multis : Domino
Metaphors : Domino
Wordplay : Ether
Nameplay: Ether
Structure : Domino
Punchlines : Both Had
Personals : Domino

Close Battle Ether your Structure Was Off Take What Mac Said Into Consideration .. Lol Domino Pretty Much Kill't this Battle My Vote Goes To Him
My Fav Linez : Can't Even Rep Yourself, ur That Wack, No Wonder u-Just-Write-For-Free ..||
i Don't Respect-u-Though, ur Terrible i Piss-a-Better-Flow ..||
u Rappin's More Pointless Than Tapping in a Dissconnected-Phone ..||

Welcome to The site Cory...

Well Im Agreeing with Hazard And TraMa.....HaZards Cats Were all Correct...KO

3-0 KO

thread closed

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