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Posted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 8:04 pm
by MesaR
That Was Straight....I liked The First Bit And The Last Bars Of Your Poem It Would Of been abit better To do some Multis..In The Middle But It still wasnt Bad Good Job...8/10.
Posted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 11:16 pm
by -TraMaTiK-
need ur Link JJ but it wasnt bad same thing as sequence said -1-
Posted: Sat Jan 13, 2007 9:32 am
by MesaR
Yeah Man Get That Link In There For Some On Lock It...
Posted: Sat Jan 13, 2007 6:55 pm
by Haz
You Could of Flowed Better in This Piece if You Ask
Me But i Felt Emotion in it i've seen U Spit Betta Shit
Your Bars Are Kinda Weird In This Smalla Den Usual lol
Fav Linez : when tha barrel faces tha opposite dirrection im never "hesitant"//
i aim to spray leaving nothing but broken dreams and "diminished-evidence"
Posted: Mon Jan 15, 2007 2:20 pm
by Street Pharmacist
this is solid i like it keep it up.
''its kinda sad murder is tha pipe while im tha "fiend"