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Post by complexity »

I think you're hating on a particular style. As long as they are making sense, they are versatile, and good at what they do.
Then in my opinion thats good enough.

In my opinion the problem with that style is. The people can write random about everything. Yet when it comes to topics. Spitting about anything relevant. They are shit. I don't know. My personal opinion.
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^Yeahh but that style seems to be more popular at this time...that bar of course was highly exagerated...but while we're on the topic of styles we hate...

I also hate this one...

Don't hate that I'm rad, like rubber factorys Im making you banned
Because my spits'll leave you 'red-barred' like the Canadian flag...

Because...because...the first line didnt have jack shit to do with the second line...it's not a reason lol...this is where alot of people fail at setting up a punch...reminds me of one BET Freestyle Friday battle (Jin vs. Logan) how Logans said "It's like my rhyme is an STD, because I came to the stage just to burn emcees"...having an STD doesnt have anything to do with emcees (unless he was trying a cum line)...when talking to someone you don't say "Oh yeah you liking the weather? Because you suck" which I'm so gonna start saying now lol...

My ranting over...it's getting late and my lack of sleep combined with my overdose of caffeine is making me ramble...
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...When Death Sleeps, It Has Nightmares Of Me...

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...I Fuckin Own You...1

"Look At The Facts...Thats Astoundin
They Took The Smartest Of The World;
And It Took A Hand To Count Em"


...People Who Hate Their Life Don't Deserve To Have One...1

"Fuck The Religions, Fuck The Politicians
I Choose To Make, My Own Damn Decisions" -Kruwl

"It's A Paradox; Everything You Preach Becomes Nonsense
The Very Second You Started Mixing Religion With Logic" -TT


...124-8 (99 KO's)...1
...And Still Countin...
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Post by drunken jesus »

both those lines are forced wordplay lmao

and that line from the jin battle you quoted makes sense and was relevant it just wasn't that great cause of the "burn emcees" when you get an STD you got "burned" its a common phrase
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
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^^Yeahh I know...but the emcees part ruined it...and I was stating a fact with the forced and played wordplay (I wouldn't waste a nice punchline for an example)...
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...When Death Sleeps, It Has Nightmares Of Me...

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...I Fuckin Own You...1

"Look At The Facts...Thats Astoundin
They Took The Smartest Of The World;
And It Took A Hand To Count Em"


...People Who Hate Their Life Don't Deserve To Have One...1

"Fuck The Religions, Fuck The Politicians
I Choose To Make, My Own Damn Decisions" -Kruwl

"It's A Paradox; Everything You Preach Becomes Nonsense
The Very Second You Started Mixing Religion With Logic" -TT


...124-8 (99 KO's)...1
...And Still Countin...
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Post by complexity »

You're just looking for another meaning. Being a little to critical.

It has two meanings. It makes sense in both ways.
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

i agree wit DJ and PLEX, thinker you were jus ramblin....but its your opinion
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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