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Lifes a gamble...and she's just searching for a hand to hold, Her life of "Kicker's" and "Hit-Me" was growing old, a bruised past she grew fast, and found that this "Pot" of gold wasn't all it was cracked up to be, This hard hand was all her life seemed to deal, and its unreal how her "poker-face" Helped seal in her squeal's...

don't feel like finishing at the moment...tell me what you all think

how do you consider what you do poetry? not trying to be an asshole or anything but theres not too many poetical aspects of any of your poems

what you do is more like a half assed version of what sage francis does with a simplistic rhyme scheme, just cause you use a lil' bit of wordplay in verse doesn't make it a poem

you've gotta work on making your poems more abstract and complex, just using a lil wordplay and rhyming a syllable here and there doesn't = a poem

actually i agree with all that... suprisingly, i guess what i do is more of a spoken word type thing, thanks for the feed back

yeah you kinda remind me of a less complex buddy wakefield (his album is dope as fuck, pick it up you'll like it)

too clarify i didn't mean it as an insult i could post the same thing in any thread here but nobody would get the point theirs hardly anything in this section i'd actually consider poetry

i got his album... 'run on anything' oh and i didnt take it as an insult... and im actually working on something that is alot more poetical you might like it... who knows

It Was Pretty Good .. You Could Come Wit More
Emotion In The Rest But Its Not Bad lol Good
Shit I Lyk Whadd U Doin .. Do u 1`

Thanks for the feed...Uppin