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Yah Just a Quick Verse i Randomly Wrote Cuz i Was Listenin 2 Eminem Lol

i'll Flip a '50 Cent' Coin, i'd Do The Same-if-i-Saw-Him ..||
if it Lands a Head, u Won't Escape-With-Ya-Confidence ..||
i'm Done With Givin Chances, So i Stuck a Blade-in-My-Conscience ..||
i'm Not Takin-Ya-Nonsense .. Weak Rappers Claimin-They're-Raw-Shiiit ..||

i'm Attackin-My-Prey When im Rappin-Away, i'm Slapping-ur-Face ..||
After 5 Cigs i'm Still Lapping-These-Lames ..||
The Doctor Tellin Me i'm Crackin-Away, And Lacking-Some-Brain ..||
And u Wonder Why The Fuck i Chain Smoke a Packet-a-Day ..||

i Got Lost Going-Home, it's Growing-Cold ..||
Sheltered Under a Truck, Woke Up in The Glowing-Snow ..||
Oh-No, My Wallet Missin Money, But Where-Did-it-Move ..||
Cuz i Kno For Sure it Wasn't Fuckin Wasted-On-Booze ..||



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It Was Alright I've Seen You Do Alot
Better Good Shit Though Keep Doin u

it was pretty good actually..i liked a good amount of the lines..did remind me of eminem...nice job

the last 2 parts remind me of em more so than the first part

overall it was pretty good for a short lil piece, my only problem with it is "blade in your conscience" doesn't really make sense

LoL Just a Fancy Way Of Sayin 'Killin My Conscience'...But if i Really Did it i'd Probably Die. Lmao

pretty decent the first bar was a sad attempt of an eminem bar, but the rest seemed pretty decent i mean there was nothing really outstanding but it was overall a good piece

Fav line: Oh-No, My Wallet Missin Money, But Where-Did-it-Move ..||
Cuz i Kno For Sure it Wasn't Fuckin Wasted-On-Booze ..||

i Didn't Really Think The 1st Bar Was Much Of That Style at All. i Never Really Thought Of it Being Based On an Eminem Verse Till Like The 3rd Bar And Just Carried On Lol