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This Guy n His Spikes Will Lay Out Flat.
Ain A Fight "Clearly" Like RAY Vs Cass/
Put Da Clip 2 Ya Stomach Let The Tape
Worm Pass Keep Diggin Ya Self Inground
Like Taped Worms Pass'd/ U'll Get Raped
Burned Trash Like Pedos In "Plants"
Dome Cleaned With Chrome Heat Faggit
Feel "Metro In Stance"/ u Messin Wit A Man?
Na i'll Blow On u Lyk Mess In Pakistan
Victum Standz In A Wristliss Trance
Await Death/ I Eat White Till Numb Jaw
Ain No "Diverse" When My Plate Fed
Da Best? Get Cut Out Of Class Like
Late Cred/ Bitch Made Pull Them Pants
Up PINKS INTACK, Hip Hop Is Dead NOW
Lance From Nsync SPIT RAP/ Soak Up
Bullets Like Insink Wit That, No One
Cares For Ya Murder "U....k"(You K?)
Would "Miss Ya Ass"(Go Past )/
No Question Asked i'll Present This Cast,
A ACTOR In The Mix Like Slim Fast/
Diverse Is Gettin Blazed Now U Can
"Think BLACK"/This Is The Main
Road To "Bagg Defeat", When
Pressurez On You Timberlake
Or BackStreet?/ Im A Hazard Ask
"Feasts" N Yea u Suck Alot Lyk Hos
With GASHED TEETH!/ You Ain God
"Beat" By Drunken Jesus, Da Only
Time u Come Across Hot When u
"HUNTIN Venus" (Close 2 Mars)/
Jump Ahead Be a Chump For Penis,
Dye More High Lights Homo My
Pump Will Heat It/Be My Guest
Call The Kid Osama Or Saddam,
Im Sonin You Like "HAZARD!" Took
A Swim In ya Mom/Start Hair Dressing
Maybe Wit Dreds You Mix"Rap"(Wrap),
Start Testin life Like Ya Band Members
Getta "BYE BYE BYE" Kick Back/ Eat U
Alive Wit Fire Lyk HOLOCAUST Hilter
Jus Hit Gas!!/

How Can This Kid Even Come Close To Being A Hazard?
He's Lost 4 Battles And I'll Just Add 1 More To Those Statures//
This Shitty Fuckin Actor Can't Even Act Like He's Good At Rapping
Were Running The Same Track, But I'm The One Who Keeps Lapping//
This Bitch, He'll Just Happen To Twitch, Everytime I Come Close, He'll Spaz When I Spit
He'll Overdose, From Each Line That He Hits, I'm One Of The Most Feared Vile Venomous Misfits//
I'll Bring Hostile Inflicts Of Pain To This Kids Empty Fucking Skull
Were Not The Same, Your A Null, That Means Your Of No Importance At All//
So Let Me Give War Amps A Call, Cuz I Think You May Have Lost A Few Brains Cells
From Some Hazardous Materials, So Next Time Read The Labels//
But Actually I'm Able, To Believe THis Shit's Just Genetics
And That Your Mom Was Retarted, And Your Dad Was Just An Inbred hick//
So Instead Of Being Picked Up, You Were Dropped Too Many Times At Birth
So Everyone Welcome Another Fucking Moron To This Planet Earth//
See I'm More Like Granite, Your Just Fuckin Plain Dirt
I Bet Everytime You Try And Spell A Word Your Fuckin Brain Hurts//
I'll Keep You Stayin Burnt, Like There Was A Leak With Your Gay-Ass Flowin (Gass)
And My Words Spark Off The Heat, So Pray Your Past Explodin//
This Blast's Eroding, And Just Fucking Wearin You thin
Like This Shit's A Massacre And I'm Leather Faced Wearin Your Skin//
It's Fuckin Embarassin, Me Having To Battle Some Kid
Who's Probably Never Made It Through Preschool, So Pass Him His Rattle And Bib//
I'll Grapple And Grip, Snap You And Slit,
Your Fucking Vocal Cords, Until Your Not Rappin Like Shit//
But I Guess I'll Have To Just Rip this Little bitch, With Ease
Because I'm Not A Miracle Worker, Can't Cure Your Disease//
So Please, I Got Three Bars Left, Try Not To Piss Your Pants
Your Like Mars, No Life Signs, Don't Even Exist To Man //
So Resist Lifting Your Hand, Next Time You Wanna Spit On The Mic
Cuz I'll Strike You Like A Stringray And Be Takin Your Life//
I'll Be Making Shit Right, And Finally Finish You Quick
Your 15 Seconds Are Over, You've Reached The End Of This Wick//

Both Verses Were Strong. Diverse's Had More Witty Punches, Metaphors, Structure And Disses. Hazard's Won On The Multi Side Of Things, And Creativity. Could've Made The Structure a Tad Better So Ppl Don't Skim Past What Could Be a Killer Line, Cuz 3 Words Per Line Aint Gnna Emphasise it And it Makes a Whole World Of Difference. My Vote Goes 2 Diverse Cuz it Was More Of a Battle Verse With Stronger Consistent Disses. Hazard's Was Good But a Better Layout And a Few More Disses Coulda Won This 1.

lol More Witty Punchlines? I Dont Know About That
Man His Verse Was Str8 But Maybe You Aint Seein
Things The Way I Am Righ Now lol Cause His
Punchlines Were Pretty Basic And He Had Disses
But I Did 2 But Good SHit Leavin Feed On The Battle
Everyone Has The Right To Have Their Own Opinion `1

Domino wrote:Both Verses Were Strong. Diverse's Had More Witty Punches, Metaphors, Structure And Disses. Hazard's Won On The Multi Side Of Things, And Creativity. Could've Made The Structure a Tad Better So Ppl Don't Skim Past What Could Be a Killer Line, Cuz 3 Words Per Line Aint Gnna Emphasise it And it Makes a Whole World Of Difference. My Vote Goes 2 Diverse Cuz it Was More Of a Battle Verse With Stronger Consistent Disses. Hazard's Was Good But a Better Layout And a Few More Disses Coulda Won This 1.

I Agree ^^

With Hazards Three Word Per Line Structure, It Gave Diverse A Chance To Easily Out Rap Him. Diverse's Bars Were Alot Longer So In All Actuality He Wrote Twice As Much As Hazard Did. Nobody Got Personal, Diverse Tackled The Punches And Since Those Are The Main Cats To Win A Battle....
Vote:Diverse.

My
Pump Will Heat It/Be My Guest
Call The Kid Osama Or Saddam,
Im Sonin You Like "HAZARD!" Took
A Swim In ya Mom

ima disagree on dis witchall cuz i think hazard had sum gud lines like those i posted...idk even tho his structure was off its the content rite?so i think hazard took it..not it all katz but i think he got it dis time my vote = hazard

hazard why the fuck do you keep stretching your bars out for like 3-4 lines? don't hit the enter key until where you put the "/"'s, you've been getting voted against just for the simple fact that you write like a fucking weirdo when its not necessary, seperate your verse out by bars

I know drunken lol na i always faget im high juz typin but imma keep it in mind good looks

Lmao

This Guy n His Spikes Will Lay Out Flat.
Ain A Fight "Clearly" Like RAY Vs Cass/
Put Da Clip 2 Ya Stomach Let The Tape
Worm Pass Keep Diggin Ya Self Inground
Like Taped Worms Pass'd/ U'll Get Raped
Burned Trash Like Pedos In "Plants"
Dome Cleaned With Chrome Heat Faggit
Feel "Metro In Stance"/

Would Look Better Like

This Guy n His Spikes Will Lay-Out-Flat, Ain A Fight "Clearly" Like RAY Vs Cass/
Put Da Clip 2 Ya Stomach Let The Tape-Worm-Pass Keep Diggin Ya Self Inground Like Taped-Worms-Pass'd/
U'll Get Raped-Burned-Trash Like Pedos In "Plants" Dome Cleaned With Chrome Heat Faggit Feel "Metro In Stance"/

Thats What i Meant Lol

yeah thats what i tried to tell him domino

hazard - you got good concepts you just don't seem to connect with them properly you're still using alotta forced multis, if you don't know what i mean try to find my wisdom thread you obviously know what multis are but some of your multis seem like broken english, they rhyme but they don't make sense if someone said them in normal everyday speech, if you work on your set-ups and multis and develop your wordplay so its more creative you'll be alot better

diverse - this verse was better than the one you dropped against me but it was pretty generic, you didn't really attack him personally too much, it was wrote fairly well but some of the multis didn't connect like they could've if it would've been re-wrote better, it would've been alot better if you took out the filler and kept your 5-6 strong lines, you came with some wordplay and punch's but overall it was kinda lackluster considering the length

vote - diverse, his verse was wrote better

3-1? I Believe.

For Once ur Beliefs Are Right Lol

Yayyyyyy!!

YAY Lets All Get Wasted And Gangbang Sum1