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with the lights dim i stare in the mirror i see thru my soul
my eyes open like windows as my screams flow
yet thru my ears i dont hear a thing,notta voice
only feel the tears that stream deep and moist
i feel as if i gotta choice so i turn of the music
no pac,no biggie,no eminem,not even royce
i close my eyes as the tears still keep streamin
whispers fly thru the air and im still feinin
still dreamin and tryin not 2 zone out
but im stuck this way,how do u pull out
of a situtation,so unatural and so unacceptable
that makes ur life and dreams feel unrespectable?
ppl round ur way starin at u as u passin
and glarin atcha demo and just laughin
u feelin like it aint fair'n u want the sky'ta be crashin
so the day will just end and u can start off new
fresh from scratch,and not have a heart fulla blue's


idk lil piece i made few hrs ago -1-

Good Shit .. I Could Feel Da Emotion Of Bein A New Artist N Feelin Like U Ain Gun Make It
lol Er One Goes Thru Dat Stage Though Its How You Want To Handle It That Determines Everythin
Anyways Nice `1

yup tru that..thanx doe uppin -1-

That is exactly how i felt right before my first battle....crazy stuff, Nice Read keep up the good work

ty ty ty