Feel His Pain Acapella

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Feel His Pain Acapella

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juz wanna c how the quality of my mic iz now cuz i changed a few things get at me -1-
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Post by 8th »

well, the quality was OK i guess. The lyrics were pretty good, some areas better then others. You need more emotion in it though man. Sounded kinda boring. It seemed as if you were reading it straight off the paper. Try to memorize it [or atleast be very very familiar with how it goes] It comes off more natural and you can put my emotion in it if you not focusing on reading. but yeah, keep dropin.
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word..thanx
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Post by Invincible »

Is that a midi mic?
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Post by Onediversekid »

Reading It Myself Sounded Better Then You Spittin It, you Really Need To Work On How You Present it, Like 8th Said Spit With Emotion Cuz it Sounds Like your reading right off the paper, The Qaulity of your mic aint that bad, But yeah keep workign on ya shit...Sooner or later you'll figure it out i hope


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Post by drunken jesus »

your delivery and flow need major work, your whole presence in general on the mic is lacking
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
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ty ty ty..i understand ill work on that
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