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Posted: **Tue Dec 19, 2006 8:49 am**

Brick By Brick I Build My Struggle
Sick Of It Life Fulla Hustle/
i'm Fulla Troubles...Take Out My Piece
"Pull The Puzzle"/
If Lifes Just Death Why Is Night
Just Slept/We Might Hit Debt
Knife In Head/
Keep My Eyes Open Chested Blazed
"Ties Smoking"/Memories Earsed When
Lost Why "Postits?"/Coke Whores Whu Blunts
Lost Children < "Most Hits"/
Let Them Lose Creation Still Dope Missed/
Put The Paper Down Keep Rollin
My Dro Mixed Its Hope Liss/

Posted: **Tue Dec 19, 2006 9:28 am**

from what i red shaz it was good but u gotta work on ya structure a bit u no..nice emotion tho perfect 4 a poem..-1-

Posted: **Fri Dec 22, 2006 4:45 pm**

Not bad, structure could use alot of work, better than your first battle, Good emotion, keep it up.