Hip Hop Forum

I rapped City's Don't Sleep rap but rapped it faster.

http://soundcloud.com/peyotepearl/city-dont-sleep-remix

This isn't bad at all... I like the fast flow
I would work on your Presence, put more feeling into what your saying
say your words more clear... get a better mic N turn the beat up more
mix your vocals better.

other then that, good stuff I always like to see someone starting up
we all start somewhere, keep practicing and polish your flow.

Thanks for the advice I've found it's harder to pronounce words clearly when you're rappin' fast but will try to do that more.