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.... Still Lurking

Post by Quix »

Not really sure what this is...have a few people from illest i've incorporated in this. see if you can guess who ;)








yes i DEMOLISH THE BEST, your whack someone should ABBOLISH YOUR TEXT you call it dope ... we CALL IT A MESS
don't get INVOLVED WID DAH VETS cuz i'll have you 'searching more free shots' than ALCOHOLICS IN DEBT////
You'd FALL WID THE REST i'm APPAULED YOU'D ACCEPT cuz i've BRAWLED WID THE BEST
and hit them ALL IN THE CHEST and let the 'shells sit in there stomach' like pepto pills DISOLVING WHEN WET///
look I've peeped your past and read ALL OF YOUR SETS ... it hurts me to have to BRING THIS TO LIGHT
Searched through the threads looking for 'something from you' still havn't found a THING THAT i'VE LIKED/////
I can't stand your voice at all .... and you think your SINGING IS LIKED? your SEEN AS A DYKE!!!
Plus 'I feel sorry for your mommy' ... when i look at this sorry excuse ... then THINK OF YOUR LIFE////
you got an oppion on everything ... but there usually WHACKER THAN YOUR KEYS
its a DISATER WHEN I BEEF ... I'll leave your eyes BLACKER THAN A PIECE of ALEXANDER KIETHS ACTOR FROM THE BEACH////
now, if you missed the part about you ... well then ... let me repishhhh thishhh shaaagain ... lol NIGGUH YOUR POOP!
it ain't shit being SICKER THAN NEWBS, i'm BITTER THAT YOU keep 'dropin those gay writtens, without even a FLICKER OF TRUTH/////



Did something for activity sake ... oh and FUCKKK YOU FAGGOT!











































































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yes i DEMOLISH THE BEST, your whack someone should ABBOLISH YOUR TEXT you call it dope ... we CALL IT A MESS
don't get INVOLVED WID DAH VETS cuz i'll have you 'searching more free shots' than ALCOHOLICS IN DEBT////

NOT TOO BAD, GOOD FLOW


You'd FALL WID THE REST i'm APPAULED YOU'D ACCEPT cuz i've BRAWLED WID THE BEST
and hit them ALL IN THE CHEST and let the 'shells sit in there stomach' like pepto pills DISOLVING WHEN WET///

LOL, KINDA FUNNY


look I've peeped your past and read ALL OF YOUR SETS ... it hurts me to have to BRING THIS TO LIGHT
Searched through the threads looking for 'something from you' still havn't found a THING THAT i'VE LIKED/////

OUCH, WHO R U GOIN AT?


I can't stand your voice at all .... and you think your SINGING IS LIKED? your SEEN AS A DYKE!!!
Plus 'I feel sorry for your mommy' ... when i look at this sorry excuse ... then THINK OF YOUR LIFE////

NICE.


you got an oppion on everything ... but there usually WHACKER THAN YOUR KEYS
its a DISATER WHEN I BEEF ... I'll leave your eyes BLACKER THAN A PIECE of ALEXANDER KIETHS ACTOR FROM THE BEACH////

I DONT GET THIS ONE, GOOD MULTIS THO


now, if you missed the part about you ... well then ... let me repishhhh thishhh shaaagain ... lol NIGGUH YOUR POOP!
it ain't shit being SICKER THAN NEWBS, i'm BITTER THAT YOU keep 'dropin those gay writtens, without even a FLICKER OF TRUTH/////

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yes i DEMOLISH THE BEST, your whack someone should ABBOLISH YOUR TEXT you call it dope ... we CALL IT A MESS
don't get INVOLVED WID DAH VETS cuz i'll have you 'searching more free shots' than ALCOHOLICS IN DEBT////
You'd FALL WID THE REST i'm APPAULED YOU'D ACCEPT cuz i've BRAWLED WID THE BEST
and hit them ALL IN THE CHEST and let the 'shells sit in there stomach' like pepto pills DISOLVING WHEN WET///
liked the punchs used here with the imagery added as well.

look I've peeped your past and read ALL OF YOUR SETS ... it hurts me to have to BRING THIS TO LIGHT
Searched through the threads looking for 'something from you' still havn't found a THING THAT i'VE LIKED/////
I can't stand your voice at all .... and you think your SINGING IS LIKED? your SEEN AS A DYKE!!!
Plus 'I feel sorry for your mommy' ... when i look at this sorry excuse ... then THINK OF YOUR LIFE////
this part was tight. the multis were used well and flowed good together, had nice rythm to it and the dissing the singing shit sounds like a personal to someone...?

you got an oppion on everything ... but there usually WHACKER THAN YOUR KEYS
its a DISATER WHEN I BEEF ... I'll leave your eyes BLACKER THAN A PIECE of ALEXANDER KIETHS ACTOR FROM THE BEACH////
now, if you missed the part about you ... well then ... let me repishhhh thishhh shaaagain ... lol NIGGUH YOUR POOP!
it ain't shit being SICKER THAN NEWBS, i'm BITTER THAT YOU keep 'dropin those gay writtens, without even a FLICKER OF TRUTH/////

the first line was ok the disaster line seem stretched to me, the ending wasnt bad though
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Re: .... Still Lurking

Post by Phasewon »

Nice shit, lines were stretched as fuck, but I guess that doesnt really matter if it's just text, multies were on point, good shit.
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