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The W Freestyle- studio track numba 2!
Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2012 2:17 am
by Seanny T
well, here it is...the secod track from the studio. the original one i did might be somewhere in the records here lol this one is WAY better
alrighty, lemme know how ya feel this one. cheers,
Seanny T.
Re: The W Freestyle- studio track numba 2!
Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2012 11:26 am
by littlefranky
the beat and hook aint really my style, but this aint bad. i think for bein in the studio, the mix could be smoother. theres quite a difference between the quality of the hook and the quality of the verse.
ur raps werent bad tho, i think u coulda upped the energy tho, and played wit the delivery a bit. it jus felt the beat was on a much greater energy level than ur delivery. overall not bad, but could use some work.
Re: The W Freestyle- studio track numba 2!
Posted: Sat Mar 17, 2012 8:37 am
by Phasewon
Ok, your quality isn't bad, the mixing levels were good, but lyrically and vocally you could practice a bit more, sharpen up the pen work before you record, keep at it.
Re: The W Freestyle- studio track numba 2!
Posted: Mon Mar 19, 2012 8:45 am
by Seanny T
thanks for the feedback!
-- Wed Apr 04, 2012 10:15 pm --
my mixtapes on hold cuz i got college finals but after april ima be wrapping it up asap. lol. get ready for it!