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DAMNNNN wait up!!!! i didn't even know that this was due yet, but I saw the vote thing up so I had to rush my verse and my mixing. That means there's gonna be a couple mistakes, but I did the best I could with the time I had. Please count this in. Let me know.



Lyrics

I don't know what I think I've been doin
Hopin my talent alone can get me into this music
Swingin and missin, and spittin while I'm hittin and losin
Drinkin these brews and stay clouded while thinkin of usin
Listenin to the music that I should finish soon, but I
Kick it with students who supportin me livin this foolish
See a spliff with a cigarette got me lifted, but not movin
While my little cousin says I'm his biggest influence...
If you got a gift, would you use it
Or wish that you'd do it
And never try cuz it just feels like a risk to pursue it and
Maybe I'll be back when my rap shows a little improvement
But then I think of all the lost souls listenin to it
Then I don't think about where I would fit into the movement
Steps take you to success, start makin the shoe fit
As discouraged as I get, I can't quit... If I throw in the towel,
There ain't shit to clean my dirty hands with

I use to run away from home just to sit alone
Plug in my headphones and dream till I’d get in the zone
Fantasize about ways I would sit on the throne
But I was still like any other broke kid that you know
So I changed my clothes, stopped chillin criminals and hoes
Went from droppin out to only getting 4.0s
Couldn't believe that I let myself ever get that cold
Took my life and then I made her my bitch and ho
Hate to name drop, but gotta thank Lisa because
Since I stopped believing in love
My only weakness was drugs
And no arrogance, but since I have been cleaning that up
All my challenges in life seem easy as fuck
Who is a person if they don't really got dreams?
Cuz if I live without them then it's not me
And I finally understand about the birds and bees
The birds and free while the bees stay servin the queen!

Crazy how little of a fuck people can give
Without realizing exactly how evil it is
Honestly, a lot of times I blame weed for this shit
despite the peace that it gives
To inhale steam from the spliff
Apathy in be in the hit we breathe out our lips
I agree with those who think you can smoke and have passion too
But how many of you truly believe th that is YOU?
It’s not the drugs, it’s the attitudes
I’ve had it, I’m through

I feel like we’re washed up in this fountain of youth
I won't stop what I'm bout to pursue till the outcome is new


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^^^edited by Tre Tru
Srry Guy i had to move your post cuz this isnt the song you were supposed to do..besides voting had started already, ..oh by the way Good Drop.. i hope youll stick with us for the next round..

^^ ya shits tight man...good luck

Putting his drop here for feedback ....Since there was
Some Confusion on which track he should do in the Tourney!!

whooooooooo this shits FIIIIIIRE!!!!!! love the emotion son.... fuck yeah... love the flow.... wish this would have been in the studio... bro this was dope...

I listened to all drops inthe tourny for this instrumental and Ima say if you werent late you would won that round IMO

yea i think my man here did a great job on this track. delivery, energy, presence, everythings pretty clean and mixing etc to boot.
we needa collab some time