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Another 2012 Banger to share with the illest family...as always, I hope you guys can all enjoy and relate.

Not gonna lie its pretty chill...
Lyrics were dope...
The delivery Was good, coulda been a little better...
but over all pretty dope track.

The hook gave me a track that could bang in the whip vibe, off the bat.

Your verse's were nice, your writing seems like it got better.

"all the faces look the same to me at the end of the day"


"an only child raised in a single parent home"

some stand out points to me personally..


I like this man, It has a nice vibe to it..
Good shit , Keep it up

I like the way the hook was mixed in at the beginning ... really thin and light ... I think in contrast to it ... the first verse comes in too up-front and sudden ... I think the level is alright ... but after a couple listens I think it's the timing of the first word ... I woulda waited a half a bar to let the hook finish ... and then come in after a short pause to let the listener calibrate.

"Break barriers and keep em second guessin'" <-- Nice line!

I also like how this one is on more of a personal/self-reflective tip than some of the others on your website ... (BTW. Nice accomplishment there ... looks really professional ... you've been busy)

These are the kind of tracks I'm into ... and if you'd still interested in a collab ... it's concepts like this that get me the most excited.

Solid Track.

BTW. Thanks for the thoughtful feedback you've given on my tracks ... I always look forward to your comments