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SMALLS vicious…Im verbally great,
Hailing from the golden state…well known for bombin freight/

This crate contains 70 plus cans…all exotic colors,
Yellows that resemble butter…my style is like no other/

Master of my craft…I’ve never been bagged,
Very strategic with my tags…I get in and go fast/

One night mission…no ending is my distance,
my pieces are similar to electric resistance…to crush a town I ain’t never needed any assistance/

the GRAF RAP GOD…is another alias,
I’ve came to the conclusion…all you toys work is considered miscellanous…as Im mobbin thru your radius/

There’s know debating this…I’ll destroy all you wack fucks,
Silvers and greens tucked…my throwies look like jewels and bucks/

Start some shit…my name will riddle your city,
Black hoody and black dickies…crumblin the best sticky…avoiding the local piggies/

Graffiti ruined my life…at the same time it saved me,
On my way to the spot…Im blowin chocolate…no nestle…LOUD screamin like a muthafuckin banshee/

Ya squad can’t stand me…Im out for fame,
Im like the major leagues…and ya’ll boys are a stickball game/

Ya squads all suckas…no style…just a bunch of stolen paint,
With the great you should acquaint…cuz I’ve been can crushin for years and never received a complaint/

This crate contains 70 plus cans…all exotic colors,
Yellows that resemble butter…my style is like no other/

^^ that line was cool, man
All I got to say is that your elevating and getting better. keep dropping

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SMALLS vicious…Im verbally great,
Hailing from the golden state…well known for bombin freight/

this is cool but in my opinion you need to rhyme multiple syllables

This crate contains 70 plus cans…all exotic colors,
Yellows that resemble butter…my style is like no other/

same here work on your multis

Master of my craft…I’ve never been bagged,
Very strategic with my tags…I get in and go fast/

i like this bar in its simplicity

One night mission…no ending is my distance,
my pieces are similar to electric resistance…to crush a town I ain’t never needed any assistance/

see right here you were so close but what you should do is once you know your closer is work your set up so once youve got to this point you can refine it

the GRAF RAP GOD…is another alias,
I’ve came to the conclusion…all you toys work is considered miscellanous…as Im mobbin thru your radius/

you know what i cant hate on this piece i got plenty of homies that tag and im afraid a lot of people here wont understand the slang so although you need to work on particulars you will easily elevate your skills just by being as active as you have been

There’s know debating this…I’ll destroy all you wack fucks,
Silvers and greens tucked…my throwies look like jewels and bucks/

Start some shit…my name will riddle your city,
Black hoody and black dickies…crumblin the best sticky…avoiding the local piggies/

Graffiti ruined my life…at the same time it saved me,
On my way to the spot…Im blowin chocolate…no nestle…LOUD screamin like a muthafuckin banshee/

cool but screaming like a..... baby would work better complexities do not always work in favor of the writer, your goal should be to paint a picture same as with bombin only using words but i digress

Ya squad can’t stand me…Im out for fame,
Im like the major leagues…and ya’ll boys are a stickball game/

Ya squads all suckas…no style…just a bunch of stolen paint,
With the great you should acquaint…cuz I’ve been can crushin for years and never received a complaint/

love the closer i feel it cus i been there all you gotta do is keep working on your ART form this is dope really because you use your real life experience

you got it be easy