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Of Mice & Men

Posted: Sat Jan 21, 2012 2:54 pm
by Caligari
I’ll be beheading your leaders
Ready for any floor speakers
Theoretically your chance of ending me, meager
So either try to cope
Or vote for someone who can give you hope
Even if the pope gropes dis Kid, it means he’ll die from stroke
from what I wrote with my pen that's now spoken
Watch his eyes close as he rips my clothes open
Left broken, thrown in the fetal position
Another outspoken showman, but there’s no people listening
Nothings clicking, record spinning, but the needle is skipping
I never needed permission to christen, I don’t envision religion
I believe in keeping a lethal evil tradition
I believe in killing those not feeling me spittin
Feeding my pets the women of defeated vets in my vision
Your style’s infantile, seek out a pediatrician
There’ll be another child missing on the evening edition.

-- Sat Jan 21, 2012 4:30 am --

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Re: Of Mice & Men

Posted: Sun Jan 22, 2012 10:31 am
by Defiance
This was all right, basic but ok..


could use met4s and multis to spruce it up, you know be more technical with it ... any one can rap but to elevate the game is to be hip hop


keep dropping and welcome to illest

Re: Of Mice & Men

Posted: Sun Jan 22, 2012 10:31 am
by Lawgix
it would maybe help if you had read the rules before you posted up a verse...

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/writt ... 25377.html

follow those and then maybe you'll get feed...