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-- Tue Jan 17, 2012 8:27 pm --

i'll post my links in a little bit...

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Bar for Bar…we are no where near the same,
I’ll crush your frail frame…and put you out the game/

Your styles mad mediocre…you aint never gonna get a win,
You should just stop writin friend…and stab yourself with that fucken pen/

Verbally vicious…there’s nothing you can say to me,
Your name is an acronym for “Eating Mad Testicles Usually”/

Abusively…throwin darts…at this lame fuck,
Beatin me?...you got a better chance runnin head first into a semi-truck/

Or square’in off mayweather…your gonna lose son,
The only way you can get a win…is if you took your points and bought one/

Smalls uno? WELCOME TO HELL


This dude got three lost and still boasting about he a boss you know
Lost in flow I’m the big one here you just smalls uno(small one)
I break ya arms cut you up and break the laws
Peel ya skin then leave ya fucking remains to feed the dogs
I’m that hard you rhyme scheme is pre school shit
Step up bitch another reason why your lost is hatricked
I'll Smash yer Teeth til your Breathing Thru an Intravenous Tube
Got you drinking through straw eating mash potato saying Aww EMTU
Let me break it down your punches weaker than 2 baby in a fist fight
Welcome smalls uno to yer fourth lost and no win on this site

-- Wed Jan 18, 2012 11:35 pm --

READY FOR VOTES PEOPLE UPPIN my links would be up in a few

both need to post links to votes in other battles or this will be closed in 24hrs... then will be reopened once u send links to a mod or admin... thanks

Flow: edge it out to EMTU
Multi:neither
Punches:EMTU
Word play:Neither

Overall I enjoyed emtu's verse a little more, but I have to say guys both f u need work on multies flow wordplay and punches, pretty basic stuff here I'm not saying it was to bad but there is alot of room for improvement...


anwayz enjyed the read but my vote = EMTU

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/el-vs ... 25336.html Link 1
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/emtu- ... 25398.html Link 2

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/el-vs ... 25336.html
http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/blake ... ml#p189550

Emtu edged out on this one, not a enthuastic battle but alrite one.. Anyways, Uno did do alrite too.. But for this entertainment, both.. As for the win, it goes to Emtu for a edge out, and easier understanding..

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Bar for Bar…we are no where near the same,
I’ll crush your frail frame…and put you out the game/

(wasnt feelin)

Your styles mad mediocre…you aint never gonna get a win,
You should just stop writin friend…and stab yourself with that fucken pen/
(lol)

Verbally vicious…there’s nothing you can say to me,
Your name is an acronym for “Eating Mad Testicles Usually”/
(so simple but funny cuz u really said someodd shit here)

Abusively…throwin darts…at this lame fuck,
Beatin me?...you got a better chance runnin head first into a semi-truck/
(not impressive ,badwording)

Or square’in off mayweather…your gonna lose son,
The only way you can get a win…is if you took your points and bought one/
(too simple for me,)

vs

This dude got three lost and still boasting about he a boss you know
Lost in flow I’m the big one here you just smalls uno
(not bad not bad)
I break ya arms cut you up and break the laws
Peel ya skin then leave ya fucking remains to feed the dogs
(brutal shit notbad)
I’m that hard you rhyme scheme is pre school shit
Step up bitch another reason why your lost is hatricked
(ehhhh)
I'll Smash yer Teeth til your Breathing Thru an Intravenous Tube
Got you drinking through straw eating mash potato saying Aww EMTU
(lol)
Let me break it down your punches weaker than 2 baby in a fist fight
Welcome smalls uno to yer fourth lost and no win on this site
(not to amazing but true)

i think smalls is to simple,alot of elevating to be done here i seen a few punches,alot of more approaches to test out,not much wordplay,and weak nameplay when there was nameplay,
not to complex,emtu got most of the entertainment here
MVGT emtu

Emtu Wins 3-0 KO... Closed, Updated