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[video]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=21a6wFuV-rM[/video]
they're just some bars i wrote in class that i did on camera after school
Let me know what you think of the lyrics

shit was good i thought man, you def on the right track on starting off. good rhyme schemes and a good flow. keep workin on that and youre gona have some ill shit in the future

Hmmm. This is alright. You're rhymescheme is pretty cool man ... I enjoyed it ... and it's interesting to hear someone off a beat ... God ... it's been years since I've tried to do that ... Damn, you really laid down some bars here. I'm with the dude above me ... Keep that shit up!

thanks for the feedback and if you can checkout one of my actual recorded songs http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UXn4guMHC0Q

Cyan wrote:Hmmm. This is alright. You're rhymescheme is pretty cool man ... I enjoyed it ... and it's interesting to hear someone off a beat ... God ... it's been years since I've tried to do that ... Damn, you really laid down some bars here. I'm with the dude above me ... Keep that shit up!

its not really that hard to spit acapella dude

this was nice i watched this when u first posted it but didn't leave feed... this was pretty good man... i think i remember you from IL way back in the day... ur name looks familiar... anyways keep droppin man

yeah ive been dropping tracks off and on for like 2-3 years under different profiles cause i forget my passwords cause i dont log in for so long