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8 lines/4 bars
Rules: No Feeding/Biting.
Only explained votes please, no "good shit, you won" type votes.
No hate votes, base this one on how you see it.

Oh and deadline in 24 hours, just incase you don't see this Green.
G'd luck.


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Umm I just woke up will link and drop in a few

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-- Sun Jan 15, 2012 5:56 pm --

You'd better pray GOD IS GAURDIN,
What else is gonna save you? NOT YA GARMENTS!//
I'll POP THE TARGET and you won't see Spawn like I murdered TODD MCFARLAN//

Ya DONE DAWG,
a comic con wouldn't produce a # 1 SPAWN//
You couldn't step to green if JUST LAWN,
I laugh at the thought of you runnin up with GUNS DRAWN//

What's comical is your MISTAKE, IT SEEMS when you battle an ART Major you get ERASED WITH EASE//
I'll MAKE A SCENE wet your strip with GAUGES SQUEEZED until the PAGES BLEED//

So basically, you're just a MESS GREEN LEFT,
as I end this like BIG BOMBS DO WARS//
I never Cena S.T.F.,
but that dead nigga there IS SPAWNS TRUE FORM//

€AS¥

This one is a nobrainer in my eyes... Leeroi your verse was fairly basic..no real flips.. Just straight dissin.. Structure kinda choppy..spawn came wit some decent nameflips. And an alaround polished verse...

Mvgt spawn.. Pm if you have any disagreements...

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Word, respect for the vote.
Uppin.

You'd better pray GOD IS GAURDIN,
What else is gonna save you? NOT YA GARMENTS!//
I'll POP THE TARGET and you won't see Spawn like I murdered TODD MCFARLAN//
(notbad)

Ya DONE DAWG,
a comic con wouldn't produce a # 1 SPAWN//
You couldn't step to green if JUST LAWN,
I laugh at the thought of you runnin up with GUNS DRAWN//
(ehhh)

What's comical is your MISTAKE, IT SEEMS when you battle an ART Major you get ERASED WITH EASE//
I'll MAKE A SCENE wet your strip with GAUGES SQUEEZED until the PAGES BLEED//
(okay-ishh)

So basically, you're just a MESS GREEN LEFT,
as I end this like BIG BOMBS DO WARS//
I never Cena S.T.F.,
but that dead nigga there IS SPAWNS TRUE FORM//
(i aint feelin that at all)

vs


Diggin-ya-rib-cage with lyrics-like-switch-blades, thinkin-youll-win?-great..
but really-your-bitch-made! I "reap" cats, so battlin me ur in for a similar-"GRIM"-fate! *
(nice)
Listen-this-kids-fake, everyone can smoke an L, breathe..-hold.. youre delicate/weak-bro
Leeroi elevate? shit.. could be a "weed farmer" an we'd still never see "Green-grow"
(hellyea)
So keep ya beak-close freak go-to-hell, i'll explode-the-shell an leave holes-in-L
Ya Jo-vi-al, i'll "signal" this win, when i turn the "lights off LG" like a "broken-cell"
(nice)
.. Don't try to 'recruit' me son, test-with-the-sick? let ya lesson-be-this
You'll never-be-big, cos your "talent"s barely visable like the "text-in-ya-sig"!! **
(ouch,strongfinish)
this battle wasnt bad at all,not bad guys,
vote=spawn

Respect, appreciate the breakdown of the bars.

Uppin.

this was a dope battle imo...

Leeroi had some dope punches...good structure...some good name flips...i like how he did the spawn character research...I tried it when i battled him but it didn't work in my favor...

Spawn...homie your dope(no dick ridin)...he hit all major points...great multies...dope wordplay...

MVGT=SPAWN TRUE FORM....

classic battle...

Thank you all for the votes and reads
KO
Guess I'm 2nd best at text and still the greatest rapper ever y'all be easy close this and put it in the classics like like lil1 said

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Spawn wins KO Closed and updated