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ok lets go...

im built ta win while u, well your just a another notch or tally
i'll stomp ya badly, watch as i BODY SMALLS like im a COP IN CALI

u need ta face the facts, cus in rap u come either played or wack
you even got RIPPED UP by a PEST, doesn’t that MAKE YA TRASH

so quit writing verses dude cause everything u type is worthless <--TRUE
infact when people mention this battle it'll be ENLIGHTEND VS WHO?

see smalls thought he was THE MAN until this VERBAL CASTRATION
now im past patience, fill um wit SHELLS like i work at a GAS STATION

then ill break in half ya legs or i'll just straight up smash ya head
i get it smalls, your UNO, but thats the RATE THE RAPPER THREAD

dope bars fam...

check...

Im RAW…like pure imported from Columbia,
You be big...im SMALLS…this lil’nigga is sonnin ya/

Enlightend…stop writin…your text hurts my eyes,
I’ll strike you with lightning…and end your demise/

You from Boston…ya’ll don’t conceive dope spittas,
Ima lyrical ninja…disguised as hitler…here to kill all you niggas/

Fraud or fact…dope and wack…what category is yours,
Mine is the best...yours is the rest…you’ll never be able to even the score/

I don’t know why I even battled this dude…I should’ve battled his crew,
I spit venom at fools…fuck up ya facial features…I just Rip Hamilton you*/

*Rip Hamilton-plays in NBA wears full face mask.

-- Sat Jan 14, 2012 3:33 pm --

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Punches: En
Personals: En
Structure: En
Originality: Tie
Flow: En
Multies: En

Clear to me that Enlightend is the more advanced battler here, UNO i beg for you to read all of the guides that have been written on this forum and take a look at some classic battles to help you elevate, because at times you're just writing self boast lines like "yeah im the shit" and not even dissing your opponent.
This isn't me saying you're completely wack, just if you're rusty like you say then reas those manuals and refresh yourself. Real talk.

Enlightend, what can i say, nice verse, had some nice lines, just keep doing your thing i guess.

VOTE - Enlightend

Cat sweep to enlightend...although smalls came alot better than agaisnt dubs...your pun che s are way basic ..

no metaphors or clever flips..lightend u came alrite.. Didnt und erstand cop in cali concept... Rest was decent tho you werent too strong in this outing.

Mvgt lite

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MVGT Yagami cat sweep really good verse purty solid young man

smalls you gotta work onn ya concepts and delivery and make sure it doesnt only make sense to you but to someone reading it for the 1st time

leeroi green wrote:MVGT Yagami cat sweep really good verse purty solid young man

smalls you gotta work onn ya concepts and delivery and make sure it doesnt only make sense to you but to someone reading it for the 1st time

Yagami????? is that a vote for Enlightend or Smalls????

anyways.... heres my vote.... since i dunno who the hell leeroi voted for...

Punches - Enlightend
Personals - Enlightened
Flow - Tied
Nameplay - Enlightend


Enlightend...

this was a good verse from you man... every single bar was a direct hit at Smalls... good shit man

Smalls...

your whole verse wasn't even directed at Enlightend... i felt it just went everywhere lol heres the bar that just doesn't make sense at all

smallsuno wrote:You from Boston…ya’ll don’t conceive dope spittas,
Ima lyrical ninja…disguised as hitler…here to kill all you niggas

this would have been a fantastic bar if you would have incorporated his name in this somehow and twisted it around.... and i'm sorry but since when did Hitler kill African Americans????

MVGT Enlightend...

and next time lets leave some feedback on our votes for BOTH the battlers... so they know what to work on and what was plain ill or whack... just saying...

-- Mon Jan 16, 2012 8:19 pm --

this is 3-0 KO Enlightend

good battle fellas

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