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we so individualistic

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upside down might change the scene,
but days they scream ignorance reigns supreme
makes my brain a fiend for all these brainless schemes
while they prepare for me small grave so deep
with shovels made out of stainless steel
holy water silver bullets try to take their team
they unaware it seems that if you aint asleep
nightmares gonna follow hollow waking dreams
like all the hate for peace so dont wait for me
go ahead burn your fucking candles we on a break so peace.

as i grab me from my neck/ the supernatural effect/ kicks in/ lifting/ my corpse over my head/ throw it over an accurate distance/ listed/ in one of my numerous predictions/ like it brings / a grim grin/ on my face/ when kings sing/ of me living/ by some place/ it'll be given/ that i've given/ me shelter/ melt the/ skin of limbs as i'm begining to bring us hell son/
but for now well done/ cause these are high stakes and i knows my mind aches from sledom/ utilization so welcome/ to the organization that personifies patience/ turn on the lights take in/ all the sights that they spent/ all their lives to organise and advertise its vacant/ so that i can pay rent/ put it up for sale then/ tax man come a knocking give him a payment/ a little piece of the pie no need to bust lies smoke weed till my very knees get high/ start to give way/ so i start to fly/ up up and away/ its a bird its a plane/
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Very nice solid drop I'm not big into structure the flow was easy enough to pick up but you might want to lay it out a bit different but I care not its still the shit be active homie you joined how long ago and this is only your 4th drop

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