Lawgix VS Defiance VS AntiMatter VS Me(ALVIN WINS CLOSED)

[Alvin]

Due Date:

1 Week after final check in.

Beat:

[video]http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=pl ... EFduA4guE0[/video]

How To Win:

Rap/Sing/Speak, anything a verse better than the other three

Voting:

Explanations are encouraged, but not mandatory, simply select who you believed had the better verse out of the four, and if you have time, feedback will be appreciated and returned.

lets have fun ladies. KCEHC

[Defiance]

check in

[Lawgix]

Checkity Checkin CHECK! lol

[AntiMaTTer]

heres my verse




wonder why im still alive cuz ever SINCE YOU LEFT/(13)
i feel so empty just so TENSE AND STRESSED/(10)
but i pretend at best that youre HERE AT MY SIDE/
yet im thinking of NO FEAR... HERE WHEN I DIE/
its so CLEAR IN MY EYES you knew i LOVED YOU DARLIN/
i havent been the same because ever SINCE WE PARTED...
im SO ALONEE and i just dont GIVE A FUCK!/
but im still doing MY BEST just to LIVE IT UP/
So ill SPLIT A DUTCH LIT IT UP just to EASE THE PAIN/
you cant see the TEAR DROPS when all u SEE'S THE RAIN/
i just i SEALED MY FATE guess it WASNT MEANT TO BE..
but god damn BABY.. you MEANT EVERYTHING TO ME!/
and i wana just stop and try to LET THIS GO/
but i know that will NEVER HAPPEN cuz its SET IN STONE/
you left me in the shadows so i WROTE THIS SONG..
my fingers are slipping..i cant keep HOLDIN ON UGHH/

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[Defiance]

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Lyrics:

Always in a struggle, ya could never reach ya peak
At least at deceased youll be at peace And free to speak,
these streets defeat, beat an eat the weak
but fre-quent-ly people dont seek the meek
to each who teach to each who learn,
your beef will burn so watch your enemies an be concerned
cuz seeds ll’ turn to leafs of ferns then trees to worms
as man reverts to plans that he can’t reverse
in panicked spurts forgetting to put family first
manic cuz you damaged the only hand to search
found out you can be hurt , and you walked away
you talked a lot but when it got hot you tossed ya plate
you lost ya way and forgot to stop an spot ya place
now im sitting watching you walk away
didn’t even stop to say… a word you just paused an strayed
now your gone today an

[Lawgix]

i've been gone like a note on the door is the
only communication thats been traced

since my mental vacation these people
keep hatin to the point where i can't take it

i can't even seem to face it let alone trace it
my footsteps i've erased it my path that i follow

is corroded and dark n laced with my poor
choices i hear the low voices its an echo

in my ear n i cant erase it so i chase it this dream
i have is basic but i swear i'ma make it

i don't want the money to rake it but if its there i'ma
take it i've been in the poor house for so long i gotta

change it from your hand to mine depression is a
horrible thing rise from hes sayin here i come

the demon is leavin his paw
prints on my heart n my peace he tossed it

it feels like a harness on my soul
now what their sayin is clear hes lost it

[Alvin]

Goodbye.mp3

(1.92 MiB) Downloaded 1348 times

I know Ive left more than Ive arrived
and believe when i say every single time
I close my eyes it flashes by
and i painfully die inside
cuz the pain not only mine to hide
and the veins that burn to feel alive
remind our minds what it feels like to die
how the minute laughs at the seconds design
since this sentence is mine
it only makes sense that I mimed
the second suggestions and find
the line between the peasant n pauper this time
cuz when you slaughter the climb
it offered a glimpse into the descent
i know you said you missed me but its not what you meant
the evidence came out your blanket of lies
when they told me i drank it with ice
how you sank in the knife in the tranq of the night
stupid skank when you die from the plank where you cry
shanked in the pride cuz you stank when you hide
are surprised? that i flanked all your lies?
well thanks on the fly
I've graved this goodbye
sing it again cuz i love you questioning why

[right]Vote Up Beeches[/right]

[Lawgix]

DAMN alvin..... fucking shit son.... that verse was fiiiiiire!!!!

good luck to everybody!!!!

[AntiMaTTer]

Honestly i was feeling Lawgix verse most compared to everyone. Definitly cool to see the twist everyone brought to this.

So ALVIN can we still merge all our verses into a COLLAB for this track when its done? I think itd be a sicko collabo.good luck to everyone. this was still fun to do and i had fun with this beat. good beat choice@ Alvin.

[Alvin]

well then

[Lawgix]

LETS VOTE!!!!!

[M33Kish]

Yo, big ups to everybody yall did the damn thing, but FUUUUUUUCK!!! That panda verse? THAT PANDA VERSE WAS FIRE SON!!!!!! (fire sun) HAHAHA

[Lawgix]

so i guess thats a vote for Panda then??? or are we just letting the poll up top take care of the voting???? if so VOTE UP AT THE TOP!!!!

[Mic S]

my vote went a top

[pest]

its was a toss up between panda and law...
panda won it with his flow scheme and presence on top of dope lyrics...