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6 bars, Flips allowed, FIRST TO THREE VOTES, Deadline: Monday.

-Twiztid

cool.!!

Just anotha win unda my belt, takin the cards this niggaz dealt
Im lyricaly insane, You just a beginna facin a black belt

Like a cigarette,hiz second hand flow givin me cancer
I invented some thin fo ya, Floagra tha Lyric Enhancer

Fuck Australia dont pull a kangaroo on me mate
Ill throw ya ass on tha barbie, put ya head on a silver plate

Lyrical Obliteration, what you facin, put ya mind on probation
I feel an obligation, im in violation, This shits child exploitation

When it comes to rhymes I gotta full house like my names bob saget,
Its ok dawg, Dont worry freeflo, you'll always be tha illest faggot

This is what happens when you fuck with the best
The Flow manifests, And ya jaw get wired like kanye west


Explination- for kangaroo line-Hes from austraila
Barbie=Australian word For grill

-Twiztid

Listen your coming here-startling-the-facts-son ||
This dudes a gangster? And he clapping-the-cap-gun ||
Stop playing how-smart-is-that-when-ya-raps-lacks ||
Dilute-yours-with-hot-wax-till-ya-lungs-collapse-and ya-heart-contracts ||
Ill Murder you With One Edge of the Knifes Corner-Then-Saw-ya ||
What rapper cares- about -Flora? Only this One From The country hills-of-georgia ||
coming hear getting more skill-then-my-favorite-Veteran ||
Making more Jokes and Punches Then jay Leno and david-letter-man ||
Im With some sort Of current flow and way behind-Due-Date ||
Why you trying to flip my shit after its-over-time-or-to-late ||
Spitting Fire Its all over 3kingz and Twisterd Being Burnt-and-Bilstering ||
Shouldnt Have Even-Earned-A-Listing Dont get me started cause im already Finshing ||

not sure if im supposed to vote yet-is there another round coming?

youre supposed to vote, if there was another round comming it would say so in the first post

yea no more rounds coming....critan uppin

hmmm...good battle guys....free flo ur gettin good man...keep it up...the only problem is that ur focusing more on multis/rhyme scheme then u r on disses and/or punches so there fore JMX gets my vote if u woulda had more punches in it i woulda gave u da vote....maybe next time man....keep it up..dont give up

2-0 Twizted


if vote isnt understood ill explain in lamens for the slow n handicapped

thanks for the props..Come on any1 vote lets get this done and dusted

Gota Go With || FreeFlo || on this one.
I just think he stacked up better.

props to twiz on the Puns tho..bob sagot lol WOW..

Honestly...dude....Twiz, that sucked ass. I'm not trying to hate or anything, but it was weak. Fillers...fillers...fillers. Thats not a punch man...you have to explain your shit in your lines? FILLErS!!

Vote - Free, actually made me smile a lil on some of the shit. But you don't need to put all the dashes, makes it look stupid as fuck.

it to show the multis but ok lol

Aight thx for the feedback typeo, i dont considerit hatin, honest critisism lol

2-2 Uppin, next vote wins it.

-Twiztid

When its not really a Multi? NO


@Twiz - good to hear man.

And yeah i didnt really think too hard on this, i didnt think free had elevated as much as he has, My props go to ya on this one man, It could go either way. All ya flokz on msn add me [email protected]

-Twiztid