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U KEEP YELLIN AND ITS HURTIN WITH PAIN
MAYBE I SHUD BLAST OUT MY SKULL LIKE KURT KOBAIN!!
TELLIN ME WHAT U REALLY FEEL WHEN WE SCREAMIN
MAN FUCK WHAT U SAID,UR A DRUG N IM FEININ
A BAD ADDICTION GOT ME RUBBIN WIT FRICTION
CRYIN YELLIN AND FALLIN 2 MY KNEES
CUZ U LYIN TELLIN ME IDK HOW 2 PLEASE
U,U SAID THE SEX WAZ GUD BUT APART
FROM MY FEELINZ,I CUDNT SHOW U A HEALIN
SO OFF INTO THE NIGHT U WENT WITH MY HEART
BROKE IT TORE IT RIPPED IT,AINT THAT SMART?
NOW I SEE A SUMTHIN ROUND IN THE SHAPE OF A PILL
WANTIN TA SWALLOW AND FOLLOW MY BODY TA GET STILL
FUCK THIS WORLD FUCK MY GIRL U CRUSHED ME SHIT!
TRYNA TELL ME U LOVE ME BUT SUMHOW U DONT TRUST ME BITCH?
FUCK U,I SHUD GET U RUSHED QUICK N TOUCHED BITCH
GETCHA ASS WACKED AND CLAPPED SLAPPED N TAPPED
4 TELLIN ME I WUZ GUD WIT EVERYTHING HOE I KNOW
IT WAZ U ALL ALONG WHO WUZ SO FUCKIN WACK
I HOPE U LEAVE AND NEVER COME BACK BE A GHOST
CUZ THE VERY THING I SAID I WUDNT DO
U GOT ME DOIN THE MOST
SO THIS IZ MY LETTER 2 U,UNGRATEFUL FUCK
WATCH ME SLIT MY WRISTS FLYIN 2 HEAVEN
SO IF U WANNA SEE ME JUZ LOOK UP!!....

This bitch fucked me ova as u can see...feed plz..

damn. alot of emotion. i dont know how old you are, but everyone prolly has felt mad, sad and pissed like that at one part. just dont be serious about this shit : "WATCH ME SLIT MY WRISTS FLYIN 2 HEAVEN
SO IF U WANNA SEE ME JUZ LOOK UP!!.... "

but yeah man, it was basically raw emotion. i can see why you used the CAPS. i seems like this could have been a rap, but it is prolly better as a poem. anyways, it was pretty good man. stay up and keep dropin.

naw i aint doin that homie..lol figure of speech u no...and thanx the caps intended it 2 be with emotion u no lol..but ty n uppin..-1-

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