Hip Hop Forum

This song was made for all my new found friends in residence at SAIT. Almost everyone on our floor likes to party and chill, and we have had some awesome times, so me and Karl decided to make a track for us. lots of inside jokes so some of it might not make sense, like the chorus lol but to us it not only makes sense but its fuckin hilarious. lemme know what u think!

okay... lose the intro... the verse was better than i've heard from u... work on that hook... and lose the singer lol... second verse was okay... third verse... was kinda whack honestly... i don't like that eq u have on ur voices... over all this track was okay really didn't jump out of my seat... again the intro kinda took away from it all... and whats up with the shushing at the end? lmfao... i'll give this a

5/10

for the effort that u guys put into it...

keep workin and keep droppin...

its more for us at floor 7 lol so yea the intro can take away from it but idk...its a part of who we r and we all yell it when we party so i felt we needed one. as for the shushing, its another inside joke lol only we get it. ya its not a track that would make sense unless you were with us, confusion is definitly expected. the guy whose on chorus/third verse was high at the time so thats why his is kinda whack haha. thx for the feed, apreciate it!

lmao @ that intro..its a lil loud is ll imo..
hmm this beats aight..could use a few more sounds..i like

the tempo and strings/stabs you got in there now tho..

that echo on verse 1 is a bit much...work on ya deliv and presence...

yeah that hook is off key imo..

2nd verse..deliv is a lil better but its still more of the same..

3rd verse..lmao this guys rhyme scheme is aight i guess..i get it tho...its a ride or die song for your crew..
so i guess you guys are just messin around for giggles..


There were some funny lines in here so its all practice..elevation is the key..

work on your production a lil or get a better mic..imo that would help everybody in the group @ this point..
everybody needs to step up their delivery and presence tho
once you guys decide to get more serious with it...

keep'em coming....

oh yeah holla when you get the chance..> http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/hip-h ... 25119.html

thnaks man, and yea its more for our enjoyment and fun then a serious track, altho i have shown i can go very serious with tracks like shadow. idk i kinda like the funny tracks as much as i like hard as fuck tracks or serious tracks. but like i said, im still tryin to find my particular style. there is a song i made called 'White Boy' its on my myspace, or at least, the demo of what i have recorded so far is, but i like my flow and style on that one the most, its just a 'hard as fuck' type style. id post it here but im already gettin in shit for posting too many lol so whatev. yall can hear it there if u want: myspace.com/seannytproduction. and yea ill put it in the mixtape section not the booth, i forgot about that section haha. thx for the feed, ill feed urs now