Hip Hop Forum

me and andrew on this track, he starts off the intro and i finish the intro, then im on chorus, then first part of the verse, i have yet to record his part of the verse. the outro will be both of us going back and forth too. lemme know what yall think!

could use more emotion in the verses.

i like the chorus, could use more layers to it, beat and lyrics could use a hike in level. morly towards the vocals

better mixing.. more confidence and emotion, or emphasis on the lyrics.. which i have a hard time with.. it makes it sound like your talking verses actually rapping


but i like it tho has a lot of potential.

If this was all you..its better than the other one delivery and presence wise. It started out a lil weak after the first hook..but seemed to gain confidence as the verse went on..and the second hook sounds clearer or mixxed better..

The concept is actually pretty good tho...I like it

thanks for the feed guys! ya ima edit this one a bit more still