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I spit beautiful-sciptures that'll paint ya funeral-picture
So keep ya countdown on a fix like numeral-fixtures
I summon new-sterile-mixtures of developin-songs-now
With a delicate-bomb-found in American-compounds
And may haters get foiled-or-buried by a voice-so-scary
That I can summon many things with a choice-of-many
So I can make a simple whiff from a boisenberry
Into a fatal disease thats found in a poisoned-cherry
That has been seasoned with maggots-and-cyanide
So if bitches give a reason that faggots-can-try-devise ...
Any safety, bitch I'll shove bars the size mallets-inside-ya-eye
& take ya to the forest to see if a parrot-can-cry-"Demise"
Others just ensuing-negligence who fail to make music-excellent
While I stay ill, always spitting bars with fluid-pestilence
Yall squares stink like Cubic-excrements, yall be resembling-queers
So I be mending-ya-fear, This be Link - The one who be ending-careers

What do yall think?

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I summon new-sterile-mixtures of developin-songs-now
With a delicate-bomb-found in American-compounds
^^ nice

I liked the multis some were off but most were right on

solid lil drop nice to see you elevating.. keep working on the syllable for syllable multi scheme..

KEep rhyming

Apreciate the feed ... Upping for more

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the multis in this were great.

I spit beautiful-sciptures that'll paint ya funeral-picture
So keep ya countdown on a fix like numeral-fixtures
I summon new-sterile-mixtures of developin-songs-now
With a delicate-bomb-found in American-compounds
^^
these lines have to be my favorite

keep up the good work

i really liked how u started,


"I spit beautiful-sciptures that'll paint ya funeral-picture
So keep ya countdown on a fix like numeral-fixtures
I summon new-sterile-mixtures of developin-songs-now
With a delicate-bomb-found in American-compounds
And may haters get foiled-or-buried by a voice-so-scary
That I can summon many things with a choice-of-many"

^^^^ my fav.

i enjoyed this writing great choice of words, nice multis and great flow!

very nice

much appreciated ... Uppin'