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[video]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jrEVDg29rJE[/video]

Let me get every bodies honest opinion

i cant peep this now cuz im at work ..but i'll feed it later...

but if you want people to respond to you faster..you might wanna feed some of the other songs first....people are
more likely to return the favor sooner...

Thanks, I'm new just working my way around the site

pretty dope homie, flow and delivery is on point. would like to hear some more lyricism in em but i might just be being picky. get the audio section blown up, shit needs activity. stay up and stay active. 1

AntiMaTTer wrote:pretty dope homie, flow and delivery is on point. would like to hear some more lyricism in em but i might just be being picky. get the audio section blown up, shit needs activity. stay up and stay active. 1

thanks for the feedback

Kinda simple flow. Video can use a lil work. Cus it can actually be dope if the lyrics lined up with the vid. Beat got annoyin after a bit.

But other than that, i liked it. Head was bobbin so that must mean sumtn good. U look pretty confortable behind the mic. Sound good too. Some so so punches in there. Maybe drop sumtn a lil more structured. with more subject matter. Iunno. Good drop either way man. Welcome

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i liked this man... dope delivery .. its an original sound. flow is dope too.. quality on point.. i like the vid.. lyrics are cool.. i caught some nice lines in there. def wanna hear more..

keep droppin good shit. dig it.

yeah man this was tight dude... beat did kind of get annoying after a while lol... yeah the video kinda went off sync with the track but hey... w/e haha... all in all good shit keep it comin man

This beat is kinda crazy but I dig it..

This was Aight playing.. delivery is nice. Ya dibs seem
a tad off in some spots..not too bad tho. Props on taking
it to video...just on the dunging and ya should be golden..
Holla@Jah boy...

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