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Paradise

Posted: Wed Dec 21, 2011 12:43 pm
by vanity
Rap-Titans is my paradise, i’m tired- uninspired with these bad cat fights
fighting the same fags on every sad rap site, they are just crap that bites
pair of guys living sad ass lives, who like to antagonize as they agonize
they don’t come to rap and write, they are nothing but useless parasites
their brains have been paralyzed, they will never be able to get a life
cant even analyze, their own bags of lies let alone get a wife
only come here to try to terrorize, acting like they live separate lives (fake accounts)
i see thru them with my pair of eyes, all they can do is say desperate lies,
why do they even care to try, when Titans wont hesitate to eradicate flies
thinking they are so wise, trying to register getting rejected more than desperate wives
using fake ip’s as their break in supplies, if they get in they wont blend in wont survive
no more need to fake it guys, Rap-Titans just wont give up till the hatred dies!

Re: Paradise

Posted: Sat Dec 24, 2011 5:39 am
by TreTru
well i like the concepts..

your message is pretty coo..imo maybe try to line more multies to give it..a lil more zest..but i dig the angle..
and what your sayin is REAL..hahaha no doubt..

only come here to try to terrorize, acting like they live separate lives (fake accounts)
i see thru them with my pair of eyes, all they can do is say desperate lies,
why do they even care to try, when Titans wont hesitate to eradicate flies
thinking they are so wise, trying to register getting rejected more than desperate wives
^^^^
hahaha i liked this most...

well you obviously love to write so ..dont stop now...and we appreciate your activity..

Re: Paradise

Posted: Sat Dec 24, 2011 6:35 am
by AntiMaTTer
i feel as though this is dedicated to me! =)

flows aite, some multis here and there, the topic? idk..think its kinda silly, but ya girl so that would make sense. i mean what else can girls rap about? Cleaning dishes? cooking? lmfao.

but this solid i was diggin it keep the writing up

Re: Paradise

Posted: Mon Dec 26, 2011 7:58 pm
by vanity
thanx 4 d feed guys, this was actually dedicated to all d faggots who use fake accounts to terrorize ppl on every rap site causing drama and not allowing others to get better at writing and learning from serious writers.

Re: Paradise

Posted: Mon Dec 26, 2011 9:01 pm
by QwarterZ
this was pretty interesting...the flow was on point here and there...the multi usage shows some potential to do something great...a nice lil drop..keep doing your thing

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