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When I crawled out of hell with my head on my shoulders//
it was hard to comprehend that I was just a lil bit older//
my heart was cold......you see-what I faced was eternity//
exiled from this earth only to embrace what was under me//
...they called it sin,I called it the life I lived//
and if I really had a choice I would rather die again//
then have to fight to live,only to die another day//
where people laugh behind your back and then they smile in your face//
which is why I won't erase,the very thoughts that seem to haunt me//
and always keep in mind just what it means to be of God-see,//
I am a WARRIOR..............I'm running FOREWARD//
you can hear my battle cry-in every rap I write with order//
I am no longer tortured,what I feels a new freedom//
so when I speak into your heart,just know I am not here to mislead ya//


its ok I got tired of writing but theres a line or two I like
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this was a cool piece..suprised theres no feed on it...the idea you brought was different...well for the use of your style..you had some decent lines in here though...kept a nice little flow...it was a cool drop my dude...keep writing

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