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Some good songs on here ya'll thanks for sharing.

I noticed a lot of you are leaving lyrics. I'll do that too.

As always. Thanks for giving it a spin

[soundclick]10545440[/soundclick]

I know that she out there -
I refuse to believe she isn’t
I will find her - no matter where she runs -
rides, floats r' flys -
I know she’s trying to find me to -
We’ll scour the earth like satilites -
We will find each other ...
We will find each other [because .... We have to]
(:23)
The Sun shines down on me -
While my feet hit the ground - (Run Run)
While the wheels spin around - (Rrrrnn Rrnnn)
N' the rails hummm (click) hummm (click) hummm -
The Plane - go off like gun -
Waves hit the brow with a bump -
No saying when I’ll find heeEEEeeer HeeeEEEEeeeer -

For a runaway on a runaway any day under the sun’s a Sunday -
I haven't met her yet but I can safely say that if things go well it could be today -
Cause I dug my ear down in the dirt - n' I heard her heartbeat through the earth -
It went Bump Love Bump Love - A little more clear than yesterday -
N' I Want - Love - Her Love - so I stand up - n' break into a run -
I'm lean n' mean from the months of chase I got determination in my legs n' face -
I got - tough skin on my heels n' toes - I've been - blowin' over trails n' roads
I go - Real fast - people cheer n' clap – They give me high fives when see me pass -
N' after 9 hours like that - I feel it in my bones - She's close -
So I pick up the pace - don't under-estimate the breakin point of love - I'm coming babe
as I gain speed - my feet start to bleed - I'm a beast cheetahs ain't got shit on me -
I'm gonna see her soon - we're gonna meet as two - n' then leave as one with 30 minutes o' sun -
I smell the ocean - my familiar friend n' her favorite hangout - this should be the end -
I hit the sand - Stop - Look side to side - Up and down the beach - No soul in site =-
With 5 minutes of light left in the sky - I can see the sun as it dives -
N' inside of it ... the outline of ship sailing off with what's mine ....
(Chorus) 1:38
I run left - I run right - Never been so scared in my life -
I find a fisherman brining his dinghy in - I beg him take him but he said "No way"
When it's dark like this - monsters come from the deep n' there's nothin' they won't eat -
Standin' - feet bleedin' into the sand - I thought - ehhh - They can't catch me -
I dove n' swam - I'm a hopeful man - any Olympic Records - I'm breakin' them -
My arms r' turbines - legs r' kickin - like a couple pistons - I'm a human speedboat -
My heads a bullet - I pullin' off my shorts cause I'm a dolphin n' I don't need those -*
Then I felt a shakin' from the depths n' kept racin' but it's on me like it's givin' a chase n' -
I look back - Splash - a million monsters emerge in my wake with teeth n' nostrils.
Shinin' in the moonlight - scales n' armor wrapped tight round something like ancient fossils -
If I said I wasn't scared - that'd be a lie - as "I'm About to die" crosses my mind -
But l got love - that I got to find - Fuck these monsters - chase me fine -
I gotta heart o' steel - I gotta will to win - I'm not an easy meal - so Come n' get it -
Yeah for four hours - kept em off me - But by the fifth I felt exhausted -
By the eighth - ninth - they weren't leavin - my lead got shorter n' so did my breathin'
I hurt all over but it mostly my pride - when I started to fade I couldn't help but cry -
2:53
I screamed Sun - I need you now - True Love is Why - I can't Die -
But my body was done n' Those monsters circled round me like a vice -
Baby I tried - I sat n' waitin’ – Patient - for the first time in my life -
Then the biggest ugliest one among em swam up to stare at me with his eye -
He did that for 10 minutes or more - I just smiled back at him cause I ain't a bad sport -
He picked me up - to lift me high - I guess to drop me down onto his canines -
But instead - he set me down in a semi-circle of horns on his head -
Then Wings burst out of his sides n' he took me UP into the sky (instead) -
(Chorus) 3:38
I point he goes - I think he knows - where I need to be - I can see below - a beach - a boat - a dock - with a lone soul on there - with blonde hair - lookin out over the water - but the sun is comin' up Nooooo! It'll kill my monster - He's pushin' fast - But I can see his confidence begin to lag - So I screamed Sun!! - Stay Down - Please - I don't need you know - It was subtle at first but you could feel it … you could feel the earth - grind to a halt – you could feel every watch n' clock around the world - came to a stop - My love - My Love Did it all - My love stopped the world - My love raced and chased - My Love will get the girl - My Love - My love DID IT ALL ....
Kill at 4:57

shit sounds pretty damn dope. delivery is on point.
i find it funny that you wrote about the sun, considering
im a big conspiracy theorist and such. id leave more feedback but
im bout to bounce to work

dude i really like your style its VERy original doesn't really sound like anything which is tight.. kinda reminds me of a younger atmosphere

loved the track man glad to see you still here

Wow!

This is amazing!
I absolutely love your delivery, so relaxed.
This is something I could listen to, over & over.
Love, love, love the hook! Beat is sick, too.

The best audio track I have heard in awhile.

Damn. Props!

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HAHA DOPE SHIT MAN. I liked this alot...delivery was on Hella point!!

yeah this was very proper..i like ya vocal work and delivery..very polished...mixx is solid too..

comcepts koo .. Chorus is niiice...

i think typin out the lyrics helped me grasp this a lil better...good stuff bro no Doubt...1

I love your laid back style and I think the hook works really well with your singing, it's really catchy. The beat matches your flow/style perfectly and sounds really unique to me along with the spoken word parts, they are dope. Nice piece of art.

im really feelin that hook. theres somethin bout it. nice job with it.
i do feel it coulda been executed a lil better but still sounds nice.
u did well with this by keeping it really poetic with ur lyrics.
the upbeat tempo had a certain amusement to it that was nice. cuz just reading the lyrics, i could really see it being said more slowly as a spoken word piece. but the track seemed to bring it to life. pretty nice concept although i feel there may be a couple things i dont understand.
good shit tho.

Oh yeah when u get a chance holla!!!

http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/hip-h ... 25119.html

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Dude that hook is so clean.. its way nice man, then you hit the verses with that laid back, windows down driving down the back road vibe man... very clean lyrics and great mixing.. sweet track man..

wow this is very different than anything i have ever read, unique and very nice, gives me inspiration to write bout diff stuff and explore new ways of writing, awesome!

this was dope man.. had a nice vibe.. beats different specially at the end lol.. but good shit.. hooks dope.. really feeling that.. its catchy

keep dropping!